I want Cerberus now. Gib me him.

So...naruto is wielding an unwieldy zanbato or "horse cleaver sword" on a bus that barely has 4 feet width in the interior and 7 foot height, there is no feasible way to wield that long of a sword inside the bus. Unless it can cut through the metal, which doesn't seem likely as he is a 12 genin level shinobi. Also, as he's 12, He physically shouldn't be able to even wield a 6 foot tall sword, without cutting the ground, his allies, and innocent civilians. So realistically, he should have gone for his kunai instead, as he would have ample room, better maneuverability, and faster swings able to generate more cutting force than he could with the large zanbato due to the restricted area of the bus. Having a bigger sword doesn't make a better warrior, it makes for a liability in small cramped spaces. Given that Percy's anaklusmos is a leaf bladed xiphos, and in the movies has an approximate 3 feet in length according to the mythos (read as camp half-blood wiki), he would have an easier time on the bus than naruto does. Before I get hate PMs from other fans pointing out that you clearly said katana, the Japanese long sword, or the odachi were usually just under 36 inches in length, where you have naruto wielding a massive 6 foot long blade, this is categorized as a zanbato. Even the buster sword and masamune (cloud and sephiroth's swords) are in this category. Which would be impossible to wield the way you described it by, I'm assuming, a 4 foot tall 12 year old, 5 foot, if I'm to be generous. The sheer weight of the blade would have him constantly pushing chakra through his muscles at all times. Point is, this is a heavy blade meant to stop calvary by decapitating horses and took large men (or women, if we consider brienne of tarth from GoT) to wield and most definitely not something you'd find in an true shinobi environment, (the seven swordsmen of the mist had extremely large men wielding the heavier blades, see kisame and zabuza. They weren't tiny. Even kakashi wasnt small when wielding kubikiribocho and Bee for samehada. They were LARGE(r) men.) I'm ranting. The sword you described would have to be one naruto would have to grow into, be unable to use right off the get go, and doesn't really suit his canonical fighting style. Hes a brawler, so, asuma's Knuckle guard chakra blades would fight him better. Or a traditional tanto or wakizashi he could wear on the small of his back.

This review was not meant to be a flame, but me trying to point out the unwieldy nature of a 6 foot sword as well as offer suggestions for a better fix. Sorry for the long post.

Naruto is actually pretty strategic, so Athena does make sense. Fairy Tail Dragon Slayer tweets about Naruto's abilities and strengths, and he recently did a post on the 18th about Naruto's Analytical Genius.

The foreshadowing

naruto uve got 2 things in your favor here ur the grandson of Hermes and u didn't accuse him of theft

ares ur a fool if u thought attacking the of Poseidon right next to the freaking ocean was a good idea

hades doesn't know Naruto very well if he thinks that ploy will work

if nothing else kakashi managed to teach him to look underneath the underneath

I'm going to make this clear to those who don't approve the idea of legacies in Camp Half-Blood.

One: If you actually looked into Greek Mythology you know there been plenty of Greek Legacies. Heck Frank's ancestors were Greek legacies before they joined the Romans.

Two: Time and time again in the Percy Jackson series they mention many famous names Rick Riordan used as demigods Greek Demigods reaching adulthood-George Washington, Amelia Earhart, F.D.R., General Sherman and many more-many of which had children of their own which would make their kids legacies.

Three: About Naruto not being wise enough to be a Legacy of Athena, keep in mind in future reference for any sequel fanfictions of Percy Jackson that when Percy and Annabeth have kids, if they have any of Percy's personality they might not have much interest in school and thus not show much of any of Athena's wisdom. So I should have a pass on the matter with Naruto because of that fact.

Four: Since I made Naruto a legacy of Athena through Minato, he can't have any connections with the Romans as for any god/goddess, Olympian or Minor to have a legacy they must have children who later grow up to have children of their own. Minerva doesn't have kids, and it been clear before the return of Athena's Parthenos the idea of the matter was saw as a disgrace to the Romans as it meant Minerva broke her vow in their eyes. Not to mention the fact that the feud between Greek and Romans was kept alive for so long because of Athena.

Also for anyone who thinks it be okay having a child/Legacy of Artemis or Hestia to meet the romans, although Diana or Vesta wasn't treated any worse from their Greek counterparts as the comparison of Athena and Minerva, keep in mind they also made a vow to not have any kids, and since Romans take their vows so seriously they have their own god whose domain is over vows I think they would frown upon the idea of Diana and Vesta breaking their vows.

To be honest, I can't see Hinata being a child of Tyche, given her extremely bad luck in the hidden leaf. I can kinda see some of the others though.

I’m upset with how this story is turning out, this story had a promising premise but you didn’t really make this into an effective crossover. Naruto barely impacts the story and seems like a pussy compared to the naruto in naruto cannon, he let Gabe basically bully them despite showing that he could kick his ass. He let the Minotaur attack Sally despite the fact that he has powers, the only acceptable excuse for that shit is hiding his power but even then that’s a bullshit excuse because Naruto is all about protecting those he cares about. I understand that it’s something that effects the outcome of the story but you didn’t even change the main story line, you just added a character that has little to no dialogue, plot purpose, or important characteristics. Now that I’m done tearing you apart, at the least it’s not in broken English like so many crossovers. You didn’t try and pull some bullshit overpowered naruto destroying everything despite the fact that he’s not that well trained at the moment.

Since when did Satyrs actually protected a demigod?

Same old same old. Ran out of originality? Nothing changed even when Naruto was added, he's not even a demigod. He is a legacy, if he is going to join a camp you should have used the Romans instead.

Naruto is not a demigod.
Why does every NarutoXPJO crossover love to use the same old Nanny Naruto? Can't he get a story where he is not always sidekick sniffing Jackson's butt?

Just a simple letter is all you need to kidnap the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki? Well who knew?