My gosh. 'Go back under. You don't wanna know' line cracked me up. xD

Hahahahaha. Loved it!

Black*Star making everything more hilarious.

Is this title a reference to the song by Paramore? Also, Patty is cruel

So well written! Paced wonderfully!

This was so cute and funny at the ending!

Aah! The ending was so anti-climatic but at the same time so cute! I loved it and how they got interrupted and Soul was just blissfully unaware about everything lol.

Thanxs! :) :p ;)

This is great! That ending though! I could just imagine Black*Star and Patty doing that XD Good job with the story ;)

Lmao... that was evil and awesome! !

woah. I never seen them like that xD

And this kids is why you wait until you're behind four walls and locked doors before having sex.

ohhmygosh SO did not expect that ending but it was hilarious. I literally laughed out loud and had to lie about what I was reading so as not to expose myself as the pervert I am :X