Naruto sempai... please take care of me. :D

This was amazing. I am so glad I read it. :3

It's a Great story and please make a sequel story !

This was pretty great. The only problem is that you kinda rambled on a bit about things that didn't really make sense in the story.

I like the story so far but plz dont ever threaten animals.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

so in your eyes sasuke is the hero an naruto is a side character you suck

You know a Naruto story should be about Naruto not fucking Sasuke

Good story if so much useless shit was not happening.

Hell yeah! I LOVE cheesecake

To read!

I didn’t see any problem with the “crying like a girl” part of the text. Characters have their own preconceptions and Naruto, especially as a kid that age, has very much seemed like someone who would think among those lines.

But your A/N was very much iffy. I know you were trying to defend yourself but that whole explanation was, actually proving the point of what people had originally wrongfully accused you of. There isn’t anything to indicate that those born of a certain sex are *biologically* prone to more tears. What you are referring here is more socialization, where a boy crying is discouraged (and thus make them less likely to express sadness through tears cause “they aren’t supposed to cry”) while a girl crying is seen as normal as therefore allowed when they feel sad. Due to this, girls are more prone to show their sadness through tears, when boys bottle it up. With that, it means that Naruto saying that has nothing wrong, as those are from his preconceived notions of how “a boy should act”, however, classifying it as “biology” is not a fact, but a stereotype.

Anyway, in case the tone doesn’t come across well in text, this wasn’t meant as an accusation but just to point out some things in case no one has came out yet to clarify this without pointing fingers and accusing you (despite how old this chapter is)

Anyway, great story you have here, I shall move on with my reading.

'Naruto did turn out alright' what a lame excuse, if it didn't turn out alrigt? Konoha would be ash and dust.

Obito is a bit OOC here.

There's no way he'd just have a change of heart right away.

Actually the fact in the A/N of this chapter isn't true. I'm chubby and VERY ticklish.