| Reviews for Snowstorm |
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Stupid naruto chapter 3 . 4/11 How does he not figure out Pyrrha’s semblance! She used it blatantly in their first fight in order to make her METAL weapons do unrealistic things? I’m just disappointed in his stupidity here. He’s had three opportunities to study her, but absolutely nothing?! It just seems unrealistic for him to have absolutely no clue as to what her semblance is |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/2/2019 Please continue this story. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2018 This is a great story as for his team and their roles and weapons in the story I would suggest, Locus, sniper and strategist Michael J Caboose, Engineer and heart of the team Dr. Emily Grey, medic and interrogator As for their weapons Locus: gun form: sniper/saw close range: spear form. Caboose: Freckles A.I. gun form: assault rifle, close range: pick axe form Dr. Grey: gun form: magnum's, close range: scalpel's Of coarse Naruto should be the leader of the team (can't find a word that goes with the letters of their first names). Keep up the great work and lets face it every team needs a psychopath since team JNPR has Nora and Naruto has (if you put her on his team, it's your choice). |
guest chapter 5 . 7/30/2018 I suggest you put in Caboose, Washington, and Emily Grey for Naruto's team with Naruto as the leader! |
Nise no kishi chapter 5 . 3/21/2018 Projection of weapons that is |
Nise no kishi chapter 5 . 3/21/2018 I hope his semblance evolves into something more useful I mean a shield is good and all but it could be better maybe some sort of furthered state like projection |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/4/2016 I hope his Semblance does get better since making shields is pretty lame in my opinion, not to mention this is the first time I've heard of Naruto's chakra (or aura in this case) getting finished before his opponent's. |
Brehze chapter 5 . 11/28/2016 Great chapter |
Mr.Nonsencical chapter 5 . 11/17/2016 Tex as a fanus |
Raidentensho chapter 5 . 11/16/2016 nice. though will naruto's shields also be like rubber/gelatin to deal with fighters like Yang or Adam? no doubt after finding out about pyrrah's special power he would re-temper his swords in magma and his own aura to withstand such heat. bit of a chemistry lesson 'magnetism dissipates when in extreme heat, whilst strengthening in extreme cold(hence the poles of the world)'. hope this will help a bit. looking forward to more. no doubt this will be epic. until then, ja ne! |
dracohalo117 chapter 5 . 11/16/2016 Hmmm...who should be Faunus...hard to say... |
Guess chapter 5 . 11/16/2016 Was this just the same chapter just put done? |
desdelor97 chapter 5 . 11/16/2016 This was a great chapter. Please keep up the great work. |
Raidentensho chapter 3 . 11/16/2016 not bad at all. though i do wonder if his weapons got an upgrade or maybe have another weapon in holding. no doubt this will be epic. until then, ja ne! |
TheClownJakkle chapter 1 . 11/16/2016 What happen to chapter six it not popping up? |