Reviews for Diabolical Lovers
Daehyun chapter 11 . 7/19/2019
Please update. Honestly i hope you didnt forget about this story
Jasmine chapter 11 . 10/24/2017
You can't leave me! I'm reading this in 2017 October! Your stories are so good, I couldn't get enough of them! You say that your stories are short, but every single time I read these chapters, I read for, like 20 mins, laughing at every single time your Yui Komori lashes out, totally not like the Yui Komori I know. Great job, and I hope you continue!
Jasmine chapter 7 . 10/23/2017
Umm, Just so you know, You kinda changed to 3rd person, and it really mae me think wierdly.
Jasmine chapter 6 . 10/23/2017
When you meet the brother's father, and all you can think about it the ketchup brand you used to like? He might suck you dry you dumbo!
Sdb5ss chapter 11 . 8/31/2017
Agh, what a good story. Diabolik Lovers had always been like a really unhealthy food for me cause it had such a bland main character, horribly abusive love interests, and a confusing plot that I could only understand half the time. Thank you for making this so much more interesting and refreshing. I'm glad you gave Yui a personality and a brain. And made the plot easier to understand. And gave more character interactions that delved into their personalities and back stories. And for the fourth wall breaks. Frankly just everything you did to give this story life. The references went over my head half the time but other than that, perfecto. Minor suggestions: Maybe you should include a little more Ayato since I feel he's not getting the most attention (ironic right). Also, don't hesitate to leave the love choices ambiguous; that's part of the charm of the show. And lastly, as much as I hate to ask you of this, you might want to include a few more blood sucking scenes, even if they sound like sexual harassment (ew). They are vampires after all. Oh, and no offense or anything, your Drabble was nice, but I don't think it necessarily belongs in this fanfiction, just cause this one has more of a plot. That's just my opinion. Please keep working on this, and I shall root for you all the way! Good luck :D
EmoH123 chapter 11 . 7/1/2017
Ma'am, you deserve a round of applause and a standing ovation for writing this masterpiece. What you basically just did for Diabolik Lovers was what Somewhat Witty Entertainment did for Sword Art Online, if I may so claim.
You were able to improve upon the characters of the show. I really love what you did with Yui and the characterization and writing of The Sakamakis made feel more dimensional. You made them a bit more likable.
And with Yui, you made her a way more interesting and effective main character.
By effective, I mean she's able to get a grasp of the characters around her and know how to proceed with said character. Ex: Her cafe scene with Laito, the scene in Reiji's study, and Her being able to pacify Kanato.
By doing that we can fully see why the boys start to take an interest in her.
I also think it is very interesting that you had Yui come sort of befriend Cordelia. Storywise, this has a lot of potential.
I really look forward to future chapters and can't wait what you'll do next!
MariTivolli chapter 11 . 12/24/2016
I love your Yui! Update please.. ?!
animeluver1827 chapter 11 . 7/28/2016
Love this story I look forward to future updates
Guest chapter 11 . 3/25/2016
plz update!
vLuscinias chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
I absolutly love you Yui! She drives me insane in the anime, every normal human would fight, not just shriek every now and then and cry about everything xD
I searched for some kind of fanfic to read where sh has a bit of character, and yours is perfect. I adore her sense of sarcasm, that she doesn't take s*** from anyboddy and actually fights them!
(Also, "I wonder about these people's asymmetrical fashion sense" is such a great line, I laughed so hard at that one :D)
Guest chapter 10 . 2/29/2016
omg plz more
ReaderNumber1 chapter 10 . 2/27/2016
I love this story, though your updates are very slow and to think that it's going to be even slower from now, it upsets me but I'd still respect your decision and look forward to next episode. Thank you for such amazing story and making yui as lead protagonist of the storyline.

Without a doubt, for me your story is the best one along with 2 more in diabolik lovers section.
Andrea chapter 10 . 2/27/2016
Thanks for updating! Great addition per usual!
kawaiijuuzou chapter 10 . 2/27/2016
thANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATINGG! I cant wait to see what happens next and keep up the good work!
Kaito1412 chapter 10 . 2/27/2016
Are you gonna have the samaki brothers kidnap yui
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