that was a great story! Such a pity it's abandoned

Frosty— I think that you should take it down entirely. The writing was good, but I was completely uncomfortable with the rape and the abuse. I feel like the way you explained the hand binding curse is way too quick and you should explain it in depth. I also think that if Antonin truly cares about Hermione, he would have her take a fertility potion so she can go back to Hogwarts and her friends more quickly, since she obviously doesn't like or trust him. I realize it's been a few years, but your writing is amazing! —MerlinAndMorgana

It's really up to you but! If you wanna do a new plotline I got one in my head that I just can't seem to get on paper. You can take a crack at it I thought about a future daughter of dolohov and Hermione going into the past and bringing Antonin and Hermione together

please continue this. im begging you.x

Please continue to write this story hon. I love it.

Such an interesting premise!

Please continue it!

I would love it if you could continue with this story! I love the pairing, and I like it that Antonin doen't change his ways from one day to another. Although I really hope he eventually will see reason and turn towards the light, so that he truly can find happiness with Hermione and their child! Lots of kudos for the story so far!

u could just continue from what u left.. it's good, we eager to know whats next ..

I love this story so much I want Hermione to seduce Antion to the light

Please don't change the story. It's awesome!

Hiatus. Put it on hiatus. But I'm begging you don't take it down

I think u should keep as is and go from there I would love to see this continue

Antes que nada debo decir que no soy muy buena con el inglés, por lo que creo que es más fácil escribir en español y que después puedas usar un traductor a intentar escribir en inglés y poner alguna barbaridad.
Y ahora te comento sobre tu historia, la verdad es que he llegado a esta de manera casual y me ha gustado bastante, sobre lo de eliminarla yo te diría que no lo hicieras ya que a mi me gusta pero es tu historia y si no estas conforme es mejor que la edites.
Con respecto a los personajes has puesto a Dolohov muy bipolar ¿no? unas veces tierno y de pronto muy brusco.
Bueno hasta aquí mi review.
PD.: Espero que este comentario te ayude a seguir con esta historia. :)

It's interesting. I'd like to see what happens.