Reviews for Hebephile
CANON FODDER KING chapter 52 . 7/19/2019
This is a beautiful, moving story. I've never been a member of the BH6 fandom specifically, but I love stories focused on the people our society doesn't want to think about. Pedophilia is certainly a thing to be shunned, but the people afflicted with it are people nonetheless. And I'm a sucker for the Power of Friendship. Anyway, well done, and I'll be scrolling through your profile for writings of similar quality.
Guest chapter 52 . 7/19/2019
Cried again damn it. Great story. Kudos.
Guest chapter 48 . 7/19/2019
Been reading this story for the last hour or so. Won't lie, this chapter got a tear out of me. Great work.
jettmanas chapter 52 . 7/18/2017
Good job touching on the three friends in relation to Fred, as well as his basic life activities.
Then a solid description of the feeling of Tadashi's visit. The apology. Turning over words, and them weighing Fred down- nicely written. Interesting when he mentions never finding images, despite looking & what would happen if he did.

Wow, I liked the thoughts on anger passed from Go Go to Todashi. Nice how he mentions that Fred doesn't need to be alone, as long as he doesn't push them away. The need to not end his life. And hanging out at the piano to end it- well done.

Thanks for writing (and finishing) an epic story. Glad I read it, and if you read these reviews, I hope you enjoy as well.
jettmanas chapter 51 . 7/18/2017
Good opening with Cass giving support to Tadashi and his thoughts of what she's gone through. Great job with Hiro opening up to his brother and being comforted. Quite a telling of emotion in this chapter.
jettmanas chapter 50 . 7/18/2017
You really set the scene with him outside, trying to reach Tadashi. Then Tadashi showing up. The thunder and rain add so much. Such great descriptions of the anger and fear of the two, then the response. And no lie! Honey's showing up as well closed up the chapter well.
jettmanas chapter 48 . 7/18/2017
'Nothing's happening the way he thought it would.' -so good.
Almost threw the phone away. Makes you wonder if the suicide rate was different before cell phones.
Great job with the Go Go message. Enjoyed the description of the sights and chilliness there.
And the thoughts of each of his friends leading to realizing her needs help. Well done.
jettmanas chapter 45 . 7/18/2017
Powerful writing; the back and forth is something. Unclean hands, opening and closing his yes to see different people, and emotions not matching what he's thinking- wow.
jettmanas chapter 44 . 7/17/2017
Nice description of him getting back home, then the emotionally charged reunion. Interesting that there's another layer of discussion to be revealed. Still, better than being killed by Heavy.
jettmanas chapter 43 . 7/17/2017
Great inner turmoil, including apprehension over Tadashi. His mental state is described well.
jettmanas chapter 42 . 7/17/2017
Finally they're back in touch. Great writing of Tadashi.
jettmanas chapter 41 . 7/17/2017
Wow, quite a reveal of the truth to Hiro.
jettmanas chapter 39 . 7/17/2017
Good reminder of his ongoing status with Tadashi and Cass with the phone. The pain from the injury is a clever way of keeping him from sleep and eventually moving on to the computer. Him being an expert is bad news for Fred. Another solid cliffhanger.
jettmanas chapter 38 . 7/17/2017
Powerful inner turmoil and exhaustion written in this chapter. And the state of the others in the crisis.
jettmanas chapter 37 . 7/17/2017
Hm, maybe the injury wasn't as bad as it seemed. Good explanation of the appeal of superheroes. Solid buildup of the tension of Fred's inner thoughts. The 'No!" and joking afterwards were done well. What a cliffhanger.
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