Great story! Sadly it wouldn't have surprised me a bit if this is what had happened in canon.

I am SO glad that had a happy ending... I can't even begin to describe the amount of anger I felt in the first half of this story. I've read something similar that didn't bother to fix it and I'm glad you didn't go that way. Thank you.

Good story

What an incredibly sad and dark possible future.

I'm glad that Harry's *real* wife (not naming her to preserve the surprise) helped right the wrongs, but that was truly grim (at least until things looked up). Seems sadly 'realistic' (in the sense that Harry was threatened into silence, rather than being successfully Potioned). I really liked the use of Lily Luna's perspective - an unconventional twist.

Very good. I almost perversely wish it hadn't had a 'happy' ending, so as to drive home just how horrific Harry's situation was, but my inner sentimentalist approves of Harry finally getting a new life.

(Also, I'm so glad the Grangers got rescued! It's all too plausible that Hermione might have been Potioned into it and then instructed to simply leave them! Their canon fates are rather horrific to me, and that just drove it home... :( )

*thumbs-up*

Great job

WOW! For a while I wanted to cry over the life Harry led! I am so glad this ended well. I feel sorry for the two boys who thought Harry was their father though. I wonder who Harry's real father was and what exactly Dumbles did to Lily.

That was great who were James and Albus dad through.

So… Severus was Harry’s real father?

This was beautiful.

Oh dear oh dear oh dear- I am not sure how to feel about this story. It's so out of character and... I could say more but I don't really want to. Anyway, it was too well-written. And it was a good idea to have it all being like that everyone made Harry's decisions for him instead of asking him. But some things, Ginny cheating on him, Dumbledore a bad guy, spells to change Harry's looks... just a bit over the top. Sorry. I know that's the way some people like it and of course you're free to think whatever you want. I'm not supposed to write bad comments so... I think it's very well written and it was nice seeing a different side to all the characters. Hermione is such a know-it-all but then that's the way she is. I love the name Hugo. I like that Harry and Lily Luna were reunited at the end and got their happily ever after. And over-all I guess I both hated and loved the idea of this story. But it's well written and everything makes sense so nice job. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Tremendously interesting story!

Dang, great writing her honey! I LOVED THIS FIC! ;o)

Aww love it especially love the ending, but who was Harry's real Dad was it Severus?

Wow! You actually wrote an ending to a story!
I'm shocked!

At least he managed to get free, I guess.