I really like this. You don't know how hard it is to find naruto fics where i feel warm inside

I hope I'm not wrong and this has something to do with senjutsu

I saw you put OC in the characters spot i dont know what to think about that i usually dont like OCs unless like done real well im not sure if im gonna like the OC being the new entity sealed into naruto or not depends how its done. Not really a fan of the whole create a new power entirely cause it usually makes them to op (kind of like sharingan naruto or rinnegan naruto usually does) but really depends how its done. Im givin the fic a chance but not sure if ill add it to follows by the last chapter updated

im confused about this chakra cloak thing its gold but its not the same as kcm right? care to explain

Im kinda confused about that there isn't an OC yet... or was the voice supposed to be it?

How could you let Orochimaru get his hands on Kuvira’s Book so easily!?

I don't have any constructive to say but I liked this. Thanks for the content!

Great story man/...female? I could say woman but that doesn’t sound right ️

i was wondering how far things would go with Itachi before Jiraiya would finally show up for the rescue. And I'm glad it didn't completely destroy Sasuke's psyche or the team's dynamics. And quite clever to have naruto to have Hiro learn Rasengan in order to help himself.

I know you told us now to cry buuuuut *intense sobs*. Your stuff is just so good and well written. It was hilarious reading Naruto's interactions with Hiro. But poor Sasuke, man has the kid been through a lot in the past few chapters.

Great job I hope Sasuke can figure things out and Naruto get this exercise down

Glad you're back. There are quite a few stories on the site where writers have had to take time for inspiration. I've seen stories on writers favorites from 2008, when I started reading here that are still being updated. I don't have that kind of patience, I favorite stories that are finished and won't favorite a story if I don't think the writer will walk away from or abandon it.

good chap

Yeah, it was an amazing chapter, really killed some time for me in my quarantine. I honestly think your story is the best one when it comes to original characters insertion!

Great chapter keep up the good work!