| Reviews for Grievance |
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IWouldGetUpButNah chapter 1 . 1/24/2018 This is a good ass story my dude. Poor loki. |
IWantColouredRain chapter 2 . 3/25/2016 I understand & I'll definitely look the story up on AO3 |
fan girl 666 chapter 24 . 2/29/2016 love how you've incorporated scenes from the movie into this chapter |
fan girl 666 chapter 23 . 2/29/2016 loving the Casket appearing at the end as well as Olief he was funny with his extra crop fields comments |
The Third Biker Scholar chapter 19 . 2/21/2016 I love every word of this, and I can't wait to read the rest! |
melWinter chapter 24 . 2/14/2016 The feels. The feels, I tell you. The perfect father-son ending. Cut off that nasty dead weight so that their family bond can blossom. I can't wait for the next installment. |
RomanticLover1 chapter 24 . 2/12/2016 I loved this story and I look forward with anticipation to the next stories on AO3! Since I don't have an account, I'll probably PM you my reviews (if that is okay?). I do wonder what shall happen next. Will Loki return to Jotunhiem, and if so, how will Laufey react? I can't wait to see what you do with this great story arc. |
aqaws321 chapter 17 . 2/11/2016 I must admit, I was very happy to see Odin punched in the face. Now, back to reading this amazing tale. |
MorganaBlack77 chapter 24 . 2/11/2016 Well, I feel this ended tith a "but". And I am worried about it. I just hope I will be able to find the nwxt story in AO3 Thank you for writing, it was beautiful! |
RomanticLover1 chapter 1 . 2/10/2016 I really like this story because of how you have created Tyr's character to be. I love how he stands up for Loki and is brilliant in getting him out. I also love how you've character profiled the others, staying true to their originally profiles, yet examining their actions and bringing their reasons forward. I really do believe you have accomplished what the prompt wanted, and I am even more impressed that it is a long story. |
RoseRed chapter 24 . 2/9/2016 I'll definitely be checking out Ao3 so I can read whatever sequels you have planned!:) Love this story!:) |
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 24 . 2/8/2016 Love your idea or warm skin and cold skin. Plus like idea that Jotnar either have size/physical strength or Seidr/high intelligence. Also love your Tyr and how he is with Loki. |
often reading chapter 24 . 2/8/2016 Good place to stop for the moment. Maybe now I can get something done around the house for a change. I will definetly be checking over at ao3 to see where the next arc goes. There's just too much for one story. I'm changing your name: you are now 'Peaceheather, builder of worlds'. Later. |
KKK3 chapter 24 . 2/8/2016 I suppose I have to try out AO3 do that I can read the sequals. Love this! |
Forever-Furuba chapter 24 . 2/8/2016 This was a satisfying chapter to read. Frigga got to assert herself as Queen, as a mother, and as a spouse; everyone in the chapter got a chance to call Odin out; Odin managed to explain his actions towards Loki in early childhood in a believable way that makes it clear for the reader that, at least to Odin, what he did genuinely seemed like the best course of action; Loki got to learn about his origin in a situation where he wasn't under heavy and immediate pressure and had someone he could lean on; and Loki (and the audience) got a reminder that Loki, though still surrounded by Asgardians, now has an adult Jotun in his life he can turn to when he needs or wants more information, or needs help with something he doesn't want to discuss with an Asgardian. |