loved it!

So many wonderful things in this epilogue. I swear, it was like watching the show, I could just hear a voice like Clara's reciting each word alongside my own inner voice. My heart tensed up a bit, realizing she sacrificed her own emotions to save his heartache, never telling him until the right moment. In these last chapters, everything made sense. The Tardis change of heart, those lovely little hints screaming out to the Doctor in her eyes. Really, really amazing well written work. I sound silly, but I'm so immensely proud of you bub. There's this high level of creativity that only few can reach, Moffat for example, that you've found.

Oh my heart, words can not even measure up to this unfathomable emotion I am feeling. You are so INCREDIBLE Melody! There is just an amazing sense of creativity surrounding your writing, this plot is just unimaginably brilliant! This whole chapter was beautiful, so so so beautiful and just amazing. I love the plot, that Melody regenerated into Clara. Not to mention that wonderful embrace of the two, oh my poor emotions that was just aaaaaah! I love the lead in for the sequel, that tied in the begging of the Shining World of the Seven Systems. I'm just speechless really, you're story was so brilliant.

I've loved this story greatly and it's kind of sad to see it end but when one door closes a new one opens! I hope you do a sequel like you said in the Authors Note. Have a wonderul day and I'll never stop reading your stories!

I must admit, I always get giggly with this episode- very bad of me as it's very somber but I can't help it. Though when reading this, (okay I did giggle at the beginning) there was just so many emotions felt. The way you portray their dear friendship just elated me! One of my favorite dw themes is the bonds formed, Clara and the Doctors being no exception. Your display of his emotions was just amazing! It was so in depth and sorrowful, really just beautiful. I just seriously love your adaptions, even the slightest just adds something special and unique. :)

This chapter was honestly so wonderful! I feel silly stating it, but you just have this special air in each chapter. I really just adore the format and style you write this in, shaping this into its own unique and beautiful piece. Also, you just have an incredible flow, it was as flawless as the recorded prequel. (Which is one of my most favorite things in the world, you most definitely did an amazing justice to the prequel!)

This fanfic, before Melody's death, was good. But afterwards? You're more or less just copying the TV show. If I wanted canon Doctor Who, I would be reading the transcripts or watching the episodes, not reading a fanfic.

Is Melody ever going to return? Are you going to divert from canon? Or are you going to be uploading the TV series in the form of writing from now on?

(I'm so sorry this is even later than I expected, I've been having some unexpected meetings about schools next semester.)
Can I just say, I absolutely adore your plot. It's seriously one of the most intricate plot lines, starting with the beautiful mystery(then suprising answer) of Melody and who she was, now to the wonderful question surrounding Clara. It just never fails to astound me, your pure genius at creating this plot. I feel, as we reach closer to December, Clara and what's happening to her continues to increase. Or maybe I've just narrowed my eyes more.. Hmm.. It makes me easily picture an instrumental background, that continuously increases and grows louder each time I read about her varying eye hue. It makes me so eager for each chapter! I really adore your interpretations in the chapters, even the smallest things tend to impact the overall feel so much.
(I did see someone hating on poor Clara.. Well boo on them, Clara is a precious button who compliments our big dorky Time Lord well. ;P )

Without melody now it's starting to get a bit boring and more like just writing down an episode I saw too many times bit oh well

First, yaaaay you're back. Second, agggh! She's amazing. I see why you're doing. That sly little smirk! So, I know you won't tell me, does that mean she's aware of you know? Don't want to give away any spoilers. Update soon

Thieving Duck, I don't think they would make the best couple but still I think that it's sweet when he does that. Besides if I remember correctly I believe that the eleventh Doctor did kiss her forehead sometimes. Also in this fanfic I really believe that since Clara reminds him of Melody that it is a very very adorable gesture that I smile at every time.

Ah, this story is so good but makes me so frustrated! I mean clara and the doctor are such a notp for me every time he kisses her forehead I want to murder her and strangle the doctor.

Looooooved this update! As per usual, it was wonderful. Length of the chapter doesn't matter, especially when you're brilliantly talented- not to mention a frequent poster. The lovely plot build up is so suspenseful! I swear, I'm always left with more and all too little simultaneously regarding plot hints throughout the chapter. Oh how I wish to be as much of a plot genius, because girlie this story is absolute brilliance. I just love the strength that Clara portrays! The trust and inner thoughts just build up so much depth for her character. :D The whole dynamic between her and the Doctor is just so wonderful to see, your depiction is just golden! You really just capture the characters amazingly well, I'm always just in awe. Honestly, I can't even express how talented you are.

This chapter was good but a little on the short side compared to the rest of them. The hints with Clara's similarities with Melody are getting a little old now in my opinion. It intensifies the chapter thoroughly, don't get me wrong. But after about 10-15 chapters with her gone and the hints building up it still isn't making the story make sense. I miss melody and the doctor together. Please don't take anything I said too seriously it's just one opinion out of millions. Keep posting.

aaah I've missed your writing far too much! :o
The whole atmosphere of your writing was just fantastic! I can never fully stress how amazingly you've captured the personal thoughts of the characters. It was an absolutely brilliant display of her physical pain and emotional fear with the separation of her and The Doctor. I'm just so buzzing right now, as that ending was stellar! I fully intended to do this chronological, but I'm still in awe! Now I could be simply embarrassing myself, as it's been a while since I've watched the episode, but I'm pretty positive I'm allowed to squeal over that ending. AAAAH! I have no clue who is was, but I'm lovin them. I remember the giggling noises from your meanwhile chapter, but assumed that was a Clara-zombie thing. Now, with the introduction of this threatening ending, I'm feeling as if they're the same. Honestly brilliant ending! I'm absolutely eager for the next! :D (I truly hope that I did get it right, that it's a change in the plot- feel free to tease me if not : )