| Reviews for Beer and Blood |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2016 Great fic! |
Emememe chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 So, I totally enjoy your writing and enjoyed this story, but this felt...unfinished. Like, we just got to the main conflict of the story and then it ends with no resolution. I don't mean it necessarily needs a 'happy' resolution or anything, or a whole 'Foggy and Matt make up scene', but it feels like it does need some wrapping up of some kind (like bringing it back to Foggy making a conclusion on Daredevil or his friendship with Matt from this event or a learning moment like that). The way it is, it feels like the story just cuts off at the main conflict. I did love it though. It made my heart hurt, which is the the mark of a well-done hurt/comfort in my book lol :) |
ssaharadesert chapter 1 . 3/22/2016 Oh man. Oh, this was heartbreakingly wonderful. I don't know if you've ever thought about this, but can there be a follow up on the fallout? All of your stories are so excellently written, I love it! But they all end just *that* much short of the resolution, which I think makes them all the more addictive. Love it! |
DarkMousyRulezAll chapter 1 . 2/24/2016 wow...wow...that was a brutal ride from start to finish. (and still as brilliantly written with a plethora of detailed descriptions and apt in-character actions and dialogues!) God, what a ride. From the explosions and the panic and Matt's injuries and Foggy's panicking and then THAT decision to drug his best friend ah and everything afterwards...oh man, and the role reversal of Nelson v. Murdock except whoa- aaa h Matt's betrayed snarling tone towards Foggy aaah it hurts it hurts-! But it's so good! Well-written! and emotionally charged, and downright heartbreaking. It must have been rough writing this. I hope they work this out, though Foggy crossed a huge trust line. It won't be without struggle- but I still want to see them make up! (or maybe Karen picking up on it and after having been through the crap of their first huge fallout won't put up with it again- ? perhaps) Anyway, really great story, and god, what an amazing style. -DMRA |
becgate chapter 1 . 12/8/2015 Love it! |
BodhiJones chapter 1 . 10/23/2015 This is absolutely wonderful. I've only started to browse this site and I am already a big fan of your DD writing. Really well perceived from Foggy's POV. The details and descriptions are spot on and so vivid. I really hope you decide to revisit this for a follow up, I need to see how it gets fixed! ;) |
Sarah chapter 1 . 9/28/2015 That was seriously really well written. Foggy's mindset, everything. |
Vivid Escapist chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 This is sooooo good! I love it. I hope Matt eventually comes to his sense and realises Foggy was just doing what was best for him because he loves him. |
Random Ruth chapter 1 . 6/21/2015 I'm so torn! I understand both of their motivations... *sniff* I applaud you for ending this at this perfectly heartbreaking moment. :') |
Pensitivity chapter 1 . 6/20/2015 Awwww! My heart is broken! Beautiful though! Well done! |
ZoePerja chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 Wonderful, gritty and a bit dark! I just love reading your style! Its brilliant! |
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 6/17/2015 I loved this story! Amazing amazing amazing job! I kind love how Foggy got a taste of his own medicine for how he treated Matt when he found out about him. I hope you write more for this! Of Karen thinking, not again! And Matt being forced to avoid and interact with him, and how Foggy eventually will make it up! Please don't leave it here! |
Beguile chapter 1 . 6/17/2015 Well, there, I'm broken. You broke me, and it's not even like I'm angry about it because this...this is just so good. The set-up places Foggy in the only possible positikn to make a choice like this, and centering it squarely on his perspective makes the action sympahetic. Matt would no doubt insist the whole time he was fine, t'is but a flesh wound, the Black Knight always triumphs, that kind of thing. And that doesn't make Foggy's actions okay, but the fic does a great job of putting all this into a believable, heartbreaking framework. The ending, then, hits exactly as hard as it should: Matt probably wasn't in the position to go back out fighting, but Foggy didn't have the right to drug him. This is so brilliant. It asks a bigger question about the show. This is an entirely believable extreme for them, since Foggy and Matt's relationship has to change. Eventually, Matt's going to get himself into a position he can't just limp his way through. I am so happy to see hurt/comfortwell, hurt/hurt/hurt doing something, interrogating, pushing the canon to new extremes. This is that kind of amazing. You are the best, the absolute best. (Thank you for the plug at the end, by the way |
Beguile chapter 1 . 6/17/2015 Well, there, I'm broken. You broke me, and it's not even like I'm angry about it because this...this is just so good. The set-up places Foggy in the only possible positikn to make a choice like this, and centering it squarely on his perspective makes the action sympahetic. Matt would no doubt insist the whole time he was fine, t'is but a flesh wound, the Black Knight always triumphs, that kind of thing. And that doesn't make Foggy's actions okay, but the fic does a great job of putting all this into a believable, heartbreaking framework. The ending, then, hits exactly as hard as it should: Matt probably wasn't in the position to go back out fighting, but Foggy didn't have the right to drug him. This is so brilliant. It asks a bigger question about the show. This is an entirely believable extreme for them, since Foggy and Matt's relationship has to change. Eventually, Matt's going to get himself into a position he can't just limp his way through. I am so happy to see hurt/comfortwell, hurt/hurt/hurt doing something, interrogating, pushing the canon to new extremes. This is that kind of amazing. You are the best, the absolute best. (Thank you for the plug at the end, by the way |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2015 I feel like I've been punched in the gut. Poor Foggy! Poor Matt! Wow! This fic flowed perfectly and the characters were absolutely in the zone. Seriously I could not shower you with enough flowers and kudos for writing this fic. That being said however - you can't tell me there isn't a part 2! Come on there has to be more. You know where Foggy realizes his actions prove that he would have lied to his friend to keep him safe bc he freakin drugged his best friend and so now he gets the choices Matt's had to make. Oh & is Foggy gonna stay away from the office to make sure he doesn't force Matt to have to "speak to him"? And does his absence have Karen checking on him - finding Foggy upset at home & evidence of blood still around the apartment (bc let's face it - Windex is not an all purpose cleaner). And you said Foggy didn't discover the blood on his window sill until the next day - so maybe it's noticed while Karen is there and that would open up an entirely intriguing conversation. And what about Foggy's guilt?! Is he gonna want to go all rogue bc of the guilt knowing the Daredevil may have been able to stop some of the night's chaos if he hadn't tried to protect him? And what about Matt if he can't forgive Foggy does that mean that he would choose the city over Foggy - where Foggy obviously chooses Matt over everyone else? And how does that answer affect their friendship? And is Foggy thinking the same thing? I'm sorry this is the longest review I have ever written. My apologies for getting swept up by your writing. I just really wanted to express my appreciation for your work. Thanks. Thank goodness this is an anonymous review - I think you brought the crazed fangirl out in me. |