shit that was perfect. made me hurt inside bad

Wow. That is so sad in a way that isn't so direct. It doesn't insist upon itself in that way. It's extremely well written and I love the descriptions. Very detailed. In that way, it makes it seem like it goes on much longer than a oneshot.

Chris

This story actually made me cry!

It was beautiful!

I've never tried to picture what it looked like when Chris left, but I think this was pretty damn spot-on.

I think Gordie would have felt this way.

And he wouldn't have wanted to show it, definitly.

This was a great one-shot.

I loved it!

-Boredomsetsin13

This is a beautiful story, and I thought it captured the depth of their friendship really well. Thanks so much for writing.

Wow, that was so good. That's one of the ways I always thought they would say goodbye ((my thoughts change with my mood of course)). I'm def. adding this to my favorites!

that was good!

oh...BEAUTIFUL! The end monolougue almost made me cry!

i love your fics. this one i like and i have liked every other stand by me fic u wrote that i've read. ur just so good at this, damn. its unbelievable.

m. I know you wrote this REALLY long ago, but I only just now read it. I don't want to ruin this by putting too many words, and all I can do is smile, because this little ficlet has really moved me. :)

whoa...that was great. and moving. good job :)

Very sweet and very sentimental. I'm glad to find a good monlogue out there that really knows how to get into the heads of its characters. Great job!

You are so amazing, i love your stories! You rule!

The ending was so perfect. That ending will keep me awake for a long, long time. The story was good, too. I mean, I'm not big on emotion but this was really good, and even I have to admit it made me feel like Gordie would feel. This place is a gold mine. Who knew there were this many stand by me fan fics in the world? This is so cool. Keep writing.

It's so rare to find a really good internal monologue fic, this one is incredible. It's very well-written and is not at all pretentious or cliched as are many of this breed. I love Stand By Me, and I wish there were more writers of your caliber in this fandom. Please, keep writing.

that gave me the chills. awesome.