Ok this story is fun, I like how Danny is a lot more scary than Phantom to dash. It’s nice to se the Halfa acting like a proper ghost and scaring the daylights out of the living. Hope you are feeling well and thank you for writing this!

I recently discovered your story and I really like it! Specially because you focus in what Dash is doing and thinking, that's really interesting!

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Also, I'm sorry for your loss. It's very difficult to deal with it. In my case, my uncle also passed away a year ago because of cancer. It was awful and heartbreaking.

My deepest condolences to you and your family. I wish for you to feel better (even better than now) and to continue doing what you love.

P.s: English isn't my native language, so I'm sorry if something doesn't make sense.

I'm so sorry to hear about your father! But I'm glad you didn't give up on life or any of your aspirations! Thanks for updating at all, and I liked it a lot! I was happy to see one of my favorite stories update! I didn't see much errors, sorry ' good luck with everything, I hope you can write your next chapter ok!

I am so sorry for your loss. I don’t blame you for taking time away- just make sure you have time for yourself too! Go change the world you smarty pants!

You seemed to have a hell of a life recently, and I am so sorry for your loss and everything that happened to you. I am also glad that you took back to writing, because it sounds kind of therapeutic to you and I hope it brings you lots of joy.

From a more egoistic point of view, I of course enjoy so much that you decided to return to this story. I love your Danny in this first scene, I love his ghost plays with Tucker as a wonderful accomplice, I love your Dash in all his glorious bully glory (with no attempts to make him look nicer than he is in the show), this fine specimen of hypocrisy, and especially where you're going with this. Well, I do not really know for the last part, but this might be a reveal fic that I really enjoy.

I hope you still have fun writing this though, no need for (self-)pressure when life is already that stressful. But I would greatly enjoy reading more of this.

thank you for the new chapter.

I’ve forgotten about this story. Long since used to stories from Danny’s perspective. But even if I don’t feel sympathetic for Dash, the story is good.

I'm too lazy to login but that was great! Cant wait for the next chapter! I love ur writing skillz too!

So glad this story is back! Can’t wait for the next chapter
I’m so sorry about your dad :(. I know he would be glad to see you healing

Your story is great, and I wish you the best.

Heyo. I'm enjoying your story. Good stuff.

Also, my condolences. I lost my mom last year very suddenly while in grad school. It sucks a lot. Write if it helps. Don't write if it's not something positive in your life.

But if you do write more, I'll read it :)

-florawaters

It's nice to see you back again. I forgot how much I loved this story. I think it's really brave of you to come back after all this time, many people simply would have let it be. Started a new story. Not written at all. I really appreciate that you came back for us, and I'm sorry for all that happened to you.

I think this chapter turned out well. It's a wee bit choppy in the formatting and flow, but I think that can be fixed easily enough. I'd love to see more Dash taking comfort in Pooky. I don't think there's enough good Dash Pooky content.

I'm glad you're back. :D

you haven't lost your touch this was a good chapter, and I really like this story. You have my sympathies about your dad, it's rough to lose someone so close.

Ummm. I hate to say this, as I love this story, but there is no chapter here. Most of it is numbers, slash marks, quotation marks, and no paragraphs that I can read or understand.

Oh Wow! This story is amazing!