They wer bound to fail admission eventually right?
It just ended really badly...

I think you did a great job! Mainly I like how you got into adam’s head well, so that even When he was denying he was in shock, you could see he was definitely affected. Stuff like that.

Woah... that was intense! Wonderful job :)

Amazing! awesome work

Oh gosh, that is...scary and depressing all at once.

Whoa. What an interesting idea. At first I thought it was Bree, but I guess Adam makes sense too. That was so . . . disturbing? But in a good way. If there's such a thing. . . . Anyway, I liked it, actually. Ah, man, ever since I learned when that song originated (Ring Around the Rosie - shoot, I just realized that's my name) it's been pretty freaky to me. And even if it didn't come the Plague, it's still vaguely disturbing for children to sing. So it's the perfect song for this story. Poor Adam. That can't feel good right now. :( (And whoa, look at you, Mia, with no long author's notes. Nice!)

Wow that was amazing! At first I thought it was Bree but it turned out to be Adam instead. I wasn't expecting that. Nice job!

"MmM, fiery ashes...:3. Good thing the school exploded so that I can roll in them."
"...Feel free to use Oly as a piñata..."

Wooooaaaahhhhhh. At first I was like, "okay, intriguing, but who is it?" Then I was like "oh, it says 'wasn't fast enough' so it's gotta be Bree." Then I was like "oh, it's Adam, okay!" Then came the ashes and I was all "WAIT, WHAT?!" That's just a journey through my brain. How do you come up with these amazing stories?! Really great job, can't wait for the next chapter of Welcome to the Dollhouse!

At first I thought it was Chase, then Bree, but for some reason Adam never popped into my mind. Great one-shot! :)