Reviews for Shadow Over Lysium
Erik9393 chapter 3 . 7/15
this was amazing
Peaches and Strawberries chapter 3 . 12/26/2017
I had five endings to this ... this ending was numbet three.
Eletrickkid chapter 3 . 10/20/2016
Wow great story I must say, very fun to ready. I never wasn't on the edge of my seat...that's probably why I read it so fast haha, but yeah I loved it
Eletrickkid chapter 2 . 10/20/2016
Ooooooh, this story is very exiting, and it gives me some really bad flashbacks, Shadow Over Innsmouth inspired a level on a game called Bloodborne and oh God that wasn't fun...fish people trying to eat you! But yeah great story so far
Jakiee Uzumaki chapter 3 . 7/20/2016
Amazing story! I have yet to read a fanfic with Cori written as well as you have written yours. I think I'm going to start watching Carmilla just because you're writing fanfiction for it. Keep up the good work!

P.s. Do you watch CinemaSins on YouTube? I could be way off, but the first line of your author's note made me think of it. Lol
SaraSamm chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
hello, actually today I would like to dedicate a few words, honestly excellent really write honestly I read your fics Cori about 6 times again and again because they are good, your wording, the words you use, the way you wear, everything seems so perfectly measured, detailed and calculated is beautiful, is it sound like a exagerancion but I love you ha ha ha, never, never stop writing, never less Cori adore cori and you give these yours essence, is or great god ... if not understand what I say because I speak good Spanish is my native language, as I use the translator to read what you write, now back to use to write this because good my English is a bit limited, but thank you very much for writing Cori and I sincerely hope you keep doing and so to continue reading what you write ... greetings thank you for your wonderful stories ... PS: do not know if the translator do its job properly and translate well what I wrote you
SoraOblivion62 chapter 3 . 9/20/2015
Oh my god, I can't believe it took me almost three months to see this! Great to read this, it was a short, fun read filled with your good writing and knack for good humor. I hope things continue to go well for you!
GrandeWeirdo chapter 3 . 8/2/2015
Even tho this story was shorter than usual, it still had this goosebump effect and that moment when Tori tried to defend their actual sexualities was soooo not expected and epic, girl. xD

Keep on that nice work and please, please, PLEASE write more stories about this ( yes, this specific) Cori couple.

Luv ya and stuff... *awkwardly leaves the room*
ssjgokurus chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
I don't think you realize how happy I was to see another fresh "Cori story" after so long. Thanks so much for being a great author and providing such amazing stories
Silver-Wolf Lord of Order chapter 3 . 6/25/2015
Just so you the creators of Legend of Korra created the Korrasami ship... just do you know.
october13 chapter 3 . 6/24/2015
Wonderful story as always. Very action packed and heart racing moments. Hope you make it professionally. You deserve it
Monebtros chapter 3 . 6/24/2015
Loved it. first story to ever give me a feeling of suspense. also your disclaimer for chapter two made me burst out laughing.
Butterman274 chapter 3 . 6/24/2015
Idc I liked that. I'm glad you decided to write this.
Butterman274 chapter 2 . 6/24/2015
I Iike this it's like a horror story. Also now I can't get the image of a hybrid of Mr. T and The Rock.
osnapitzbex chapter 3 . 6/22/2015
AhMaGhad! Such a cute ending :3 all Cori an cutesie :D I'm glad they're safe but poor Kayla, she true to help from the very start! That cowardly little tow guy! :

I lolled at this part: "You were beaten by a bisexual and a girl who don't need no labels!"... "Bitch"
Yeah I lolled hard at that, I could just see the attitude and expression on her face when she said it :)

As always you did an excellent job and I do hope their story isn't over from this pov. And like always I more than look foreword o your next story :)
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