I can't agree with the previous reviewer more. I was just re-reading this story and I realized that I didn't review it. It can't be stated better than Falling Right Side-Up did, but I wanted to comment anyway.
Your characterization and dialogue between the Doctor and Clara is so perfect it could be from a script (if not for the scenario).
This is one of my favorite stories! You are one of my favorite authors and everything I have read of yours is incredible! Your ability to write for 12/Clara astounds me. This story is amazing and I can't say it enough. Thank you!

OMG. That was perfect. Seriously. The characterization was spot on. So many fics are formulaic about the whole "someone forced us to do it" (in any fandom). They could all be one, the only difference being biology and character names. But you really capture the characters of Clara and Twelve-their friendship, and how they're always clashing/egging each other on, and just gwah. Love it. If Doctor Who made this relationship canon and featured sex, this would be canon.

Great story! :)

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What a delicious little story...bravo

Ok, I have only begun to watch Dr. Who, and I felt that looking into some fan fic stories would help me get into the show quicker (just on the 3rd ep of the 9th doctor, so really new to this) and I have to say that of any fandom, this story ranks in my top 5 and I don't even know the characters! I laughed out loud and really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for writing. I'd love to see a follow up where they examine their feelings and are able to take some time with one another. Great work!

Great title for a sexy story!

Hot! And you totally have the voice of both of these characters down. I'll definitely have to check out more of yours.

"I'll get you there." Whew. That is my new favorite line in any fanfic. Ever.
I adored this! Great work!

This and all of your other stories are so insanely good. You stick to the characters so well it's unbelievable. I can see everything happening exactly as you play it out, and I can always hear their voices saying every bit of dialogue because you write them so true. I don't have to imagine their voices on their lines and convince myself it's them, if that makes sense. In my mind, I can hear them, and that is an extremely difficult thing to accomplish. Thank you so much for all the encouragement you have given me on my little fic, and I aspire to one day be able to write on your level. :))

Wow...hot! :D

Like it!

I am still laughing at 'rumpy pumpy'. A nice lighthearted, humorous and sexy fic, as good as usually expected from you.

This should be sexy but it's mostly gross. Orgasm is imperative yet I shall not touch your clit! I shall get you there through emotional manipulation!

Ok, this was written by a 'pick up artist', maybe?

Love the humorous banter. The Doctor was staying out of Clara's reach (wrath) and then he wasn't...