| Reviews for If we burn, we burn together |
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Pupten chapter 66 . 5/18/2017 AHHHH I really need to review where I can log in. This chapter! All my heart warming feels! I only have one thing to say to sum up how I feel: Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! |
ItsKid chapter 66 . 5/17/2017 Whoa wait. A few more chapters? Before this ends? When you mean end is it The end or the end of another part? Emily you're scaring me now. Right, that ending gave me chills but can i just..wow...finally! A somewhat end to the cat and mouse chase on their trust issues, them bonding again :,). And that battle with the cybermen and daleks? Fantastic imagery! Its fun to read a really good battle scene with details that makes it more realistic! AND LEX I WAS LOVIN THAT BOY ON THE LAST CHAPTER AND YOU ALMOST- *exhales* Loveitloveitliveit! :D |
Spottedpath73 chapter 1 . 5/17/2017 As a testimony to your greatness and addictiveness of your writing, I read all 66 chapters in ONE FREAKING DAY. Didn't go to sleep until 4. Since I am forever a TenxRose shipper, I admit I was slightly upset when Ten regenerated (but I got over it, as usual), and I was further disgruntled when Rose left the Doctor! And that shock drove me to power through the rest of the chapters before I shut my eyes. What's amazing is how you are able to write in these new situations, change the canon a bit, yet still stay true to the characters while heightening the drama in a way that doesn't turn off, but fires up! Please post again soon, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. *commences rereading all 66 again* |
cyandevil666 chapter 66 . 5/12/2017 SNEAKY! You added more to the ending than from what you'd originally gave me! I would have missed this added gem of fluff and lightheartedness if I didn't check the update! LOL. Sneaky! On another note, as your beta, I can't help but spot a typo in the new material, so I must inform you that in the sentence: "He kept grinning as he made his way backwards towards the console as though he couldn't quite risk taking his eyes of her." - 'of' should be "off. Anyways, even though it was sneaky, I loved it! It was a nice pleasant surprised! Love the little things between them. It was always their little antics and interactions that made them so compelling as an OTP. They were just so in sync with each other, and it radiates so well off the screen. God, I miss the concept of them. LOL. I'm such a sucker for well written characters and relationships. Anyways, can't wait for more from you darling. Hopefully, I next time I'll be less busy! |
emmett2 chapter 66 . 5/11/2017 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You've got to be kidding me! I was soo relieved! After ages the first chapter which doesn't kill me (I was smiling!) - and then in the last few sentences you just go ahead and destroy everything again! How can you do that to me?! Weeeeelll, at least you gave us a little emotional break.. :) And it was beautiful to watch the two of them act as a unit - a really cute one! :D But I really liked the thought of Rose bringing his "good self" back... :) And I loved the "Bigger Boom!"! It's such an Eleventh Doctor thing to say! :D I was really shocked when you "killed" Lex! That would have been devastating... his dad's heartbreak was so sad :( And Rose is right, a scared Doctor really is terrifying! Because you know he will probably do something incredibly stupid but you have no idea what! Love to read from you soon emmett2 P.S.: Even though I have to admit that I'm kind of looking forward to the "real convincing". Because I kind of love and hate these emotions at the same time.. :D And to be honest I kind of missed The conversation before the happy ending, so I'm glad that it's still to come.. :) |
Lexbex1126 chapter 65 . 5/5/2017 This story is fantastic. I read it in the days and was extremely distracting from my finals. I'm in love with the way you make the reader feel as if they are actually inside the story. I feel like when a character gets torn apart, I'm getting torn apart too. Or when they're happy, I'm happy. I'm very excited for the next update. Make it soon! |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/4/2017 This is an amazing fanfic! Just one teensy problem with your spelling. You keep using loose when you should be using lose. Loose means something that needs tightened, like laces or a screw. Lose is when you don't have something anymore, like you can lose your glasses or lose at a chess tournament. So..."I thought I was going to loose you for a moment,..." should be "I thought I was going to lose you for a moment,..." I'm off to work, but I look forward to reading more of your story later on. |
emmett2 chapter 65 . 4/29/2017 You really made my day with this chapter! :D So thank you very much for that! Their relationship - or what is left of it - seems so .. hopeless :/ But I can't believe that it won't get better... I just can't! I need a happy ending - PLEASE tell me everything is going to be fine?! The Doctor really wants Rose to tell him she doesn't love him (anymore). I would really love to hear more about that from his point of view. Like why, his feelings (is it just a rational wish?, does he needs to hear it and at the same time not?, ...), did River telling him she told Rose to break up with him change anything for him (what was his reaction?) and what would happen if she really said it (maybe in a dream?). Maybe it sounds weird, but I'd like to hear his pain and thoughts about not feeling good enough. And I'm kind of freaked out what our mean psycho-sisters have planned for them next... because trying to find out what the Doctor would do for Rose is never a good idea.. :O I was just wondering.. can you lie through the bond in the truth-field..? And what I meant to ask: Are you planing on writing a trilogy? Love to hear from you soon emmett2 |
emmett2 chapter 64 . 4/18/2017 I'm speechless... which is quite a bad thing when you're trying to write a review.. But this story is one of the best stories I've ever read! And even though there was no angst warning, it was the biggest emotional rollercoaster of my life! Most of the time it was so heart wrenching sad.. and then there were those moments of hope... You're an amazing writer - even if you're going to kill me with all these emotions! I hope you'll update soon! emmett2 |
TheDoctorMulder chapter 59 . 4/16/2017 This story hurts so good. |
Guest chapter 64 . 4/6/2017 Really good...needs to be finished can't wait to see if rose and the doctor can resolve their problems |
KP chapter 64 . 4/3/2017 I'm so sorry I didn't review the last one or two chapters! I read on an app and the review feature is kerplunky so I have to get on my PC and I just forget because I'm terrible. But I simply must review this one. Outstanding! Every time. The emotions are so real and so intense that I find myself tearing up, my heart racing, along with the action and angst in the scenes. I love it. First story I refresh every day, in hopes a new chapter comes faster than anticipated. I love it. I had so much anxiety when the Doctor was trying to talk to Rose about River that I almost thought I would be sick, esp when Rose cut him off. Dear god woman, let him talk! I loooove it! Seriously, the best thing ever. I eagerly await more! |
LieselMargarite chapter 64 . 4/2/2017 Aaargh! More angst. |
Editrx chapter 64 . 4/1/2017 So good to see another chapter! The scenes with River were heartbreaking. |
StoryGirlWrites chapter 25 . 4/1/2017 Ok, wow. I read this and at parts was so frustrated and mad at myself for reading it that I wanted to stop. It was just too miserable, but I had invested so much time into it I plodded along...hoping beyond hope that there would be some form of redemption to someone in here...even if it wasn't the Doctor and Rose. It turned into a wonderful story after all. I just wouldn't read the first 18 chapters again...ever. It was just too painful. |