Oh no you didn't! Argh, what a beautiful heartwarming story. A not so douchy Alucard, and finally, Seras is being shown she's cared for and loved. I'm a big dude but you sure know how to make me melt like a damn schoolgirl. Looking forward to Alucard and Seras lovely relationship, and less quarrels pls and more cheese! lol. Love this.

I think that the change in Alucard is understandable at this point. Especially since the only time you hear it is when he's thinking and expressing himself. He'd so deny changing outright to anyone in the outside though, but if you do continue it will be interesting to see how he eventually "comes out" to Seras without scaring her too much.

Yes, I freaking loved that Girlycard issue was dealt with. And in the Manga, Girlycard really does act different...Especially with the whole barking at the Werewolf thing and leaving on that Coffin afterwards.

Alcuard's always been cheeky but here, he (or rather) she's taking it to a new level. I love that Seras is still somewhat uneasy about their relationship. She's firm in knowing that she loves him but there's still some question- or fear- that she doesn't know the totality of Alucard's feelings. That's going to be tricky; as we all know, Alucard's not one to be pinned down, especially in dealing with his emotions. That's what makes this such a great story to read. It's new terrain, sort to speak. And I'm loving every minute of it.

Great work :)

I liked the softer side of Alucard... even if he was in his female form! If he and Seras had really gotten together, then I think he would have been nice, caring, loving to her... it might take a couple hundred years, but it could have happened!

Can't wait for chapter 3! XD

I really enjoyed the soft version of Alucard. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I really appreciate that you kept Alucard Alucard. and that you have Seras understand that. It's quite lovely and I'm enjoying it. It's a little saddening that there's no lemon, but the content enough is good to the point where it's not altogether needed. I could kind of tell that English wasn't your first language, but you did one awesome job of it regardless. Just a couple of grammatical errors and spelling errors here and there. Not bad, my friend, not bad.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy Writing!

Most definitely keeping up with this one! If there's one thing I love about reading fan fic, it's how the authors manage to do justice to so many of my thoughts when reading/watching the source material. I'm a shameless Alucard/anyone shipper, so be it Integra or Seras, I'm totally down for it.

The only thing wrong with this chapter is that it ended too soon, lol.

Great work, I enjoyed reading!

Wow, this story is interesting. :)

I would like to see more

a promising start, i look forward to seeing how you proceed

just to get the obligatory grammar fyi out of the way: be careful of your tense changes - while i understood the first person stuff was seras' pov and the third-person view was alucard's it's still kind of confused me - one or the other please! likewise this is still very well done even if english isn't your first language, just keep working at it!