Reviews for A Century Later |
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Bazil chapter 3 . 8/22/2015 Please yes I know this is evil but triangle Inferno, Skye, and Treasure. |
LongLiveThorn chapter 2 . 7/4/2015 Yeah! Your changes are fine! Although she's only quiet and sweet when she doesn't know you, so... Anyway yeah thats fine! |
Leo L. Carenger chapter 3 . 6/23/2015 Name:Nocturnal Age:8 Gender:Boy Appearance:Dark blue shiny scales, a pattern of blue and green mixed in teal color changing scales, yellowish orange eyes, prehensile tail, raised rain wing horns with smaller horn under and small frills, small but wide night wing scales and under wings, and rain wing fangs Crush:Sunrise Friends:Kite Other:Born under three moons, moons enhance powers but takes lots of energy when active during night, can control mind powers, sees into the future to avoid danger seconds away, sun re-charges energy, guards jade mountain but stays hidden on a peek/cave to re-charge his energy during day, rain wing night wing mix, possible background character but if possible a winglet, thinks he might be related to rain wing royalty, eyes and patterns on him can change color, has acidic venom that he can shoot or inject but it's in his blood stream which causes pain from the inside Statement: I know SYOC is over, but I've been trying to make a fanfiction acount for mounths on end and so has my brother AKA the not yet made Kite, you can change anything on my character if I can at least be a character in your series. From the profile Leo L. Carenger. |
kaitheawesomeguy chapter 3 . 6/21/2015 Good. Shard is my favorite OC. I'm glad you picked her. (: |
Day Fury Queen chapter 2 . 6/20/2015 Never mind, I'm gonna do it. Name: Gelù (means frost in Ancient Greek or something) Age: 7 Gender: female Species: IceWing Appearance: Blue-white overscales, almost silver underscales, leading to an often eerie shimmering look. She has a silver hoop earring in her left ear, and silver armbands(not sure what to call them on a dragon) on her forelegs only Personality: Somewhat bitter, for a reason no dragon has been able to pry out of her. She is often sarcastic, but this hides her fears of never being good enough at anything and also rejection. Normally though she is mellow (for an IceWing), and slightly cheerful. She doesn't hate NightWings even though her parents told her what they did, because the dragons involved in it are dead, and she doesn't care about it. She doesn't make friends easily, and is a total scrollworm. History: She was raised with her parents, and had no other siblings. Her family is lower IceWing nobility, so she's friends with a few higher ranking IceWings. She led a rather sheltered life in the Ice Kingdom, so she's a bit underwhelmed by the more illiterate dragons, and overwhelmed by the school's chaos. She loves drama, but the more bloody mysterious type because living with court drama instilled her disdain of gossip and that sort of stuff. Crush&Friends: See what I had for my last OC, except she left her friends behind in the Ice Kingdom, so she has no friends here. |
Day Fury Queen chapter 3 . 6/20/2015 Aw man. Oh well, life happens. Can I add an IceWing? |
Doodle Knight chapter 3 . 6/20/2015 Thank you so much for accepting Shadowsnake! |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/19/2015 Alright! Let's get this show on the road! Too early to say who my favourite characters are, it'll take a couple chapters before I decide. |
thefirethatwillcatchyou chapter 3 . 6/19/2015 Yay! New chapter! And yes, you can make Hibiscus a rain/sea hybrid! |
mysteryreader6626 chapter 3 . 6/19/2015 Great chapter! And yay, no OCs anymore! Well, from me. I am confused which group Golden is. And also, can I make a suggestion? Can you take off the crush part in the poll? The thing is, that makes us put random names that cause you to make another OC, and that causes a lot more work. But, that is just a suggestion. When are you going to update the summary? I recommend to close the OCs. But good chapter! Although, I though Garnet would be a bit grumpier. Oh well. Good luck! |
Doodle Knight chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 (cont.) In other words, nobody knows about her secret crush or Ivory. But whenever Sunset is around her guard goes a teeny bit down. I would appreciate it if she is a main/secondary character or gets a sub-plot. |
Doodle Knight chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 Name: Shadowsnake Age: 7 years (born on brightest night) Gender: Female Species: 25% RainWing, 75% NightWing Appearance: Dark, almost black, lavender with icy blue eyes and white nightscales Personality: Anti-social, prefers to be left alone. Deep inside, however, she can be funny snd affectionate. History: Her older sister, Ivory, was killed because she betrayed the RainWings. A closely guarded secret. Crush: In her subconscious, Sunset, though she doesn't want another Ivory so she pretends she likes the (male) NightWing of your choice Friends: Skye Other: She is jealous of pure-blood dragons. Because of her RainWing blood, she can change the appearance of her emotions rathet than her scales (So whatever telepaths hear from her is often lies) And she can see the past rather than the future. |
kaitheawesomeguy chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 The Icewing for group 2: Name: Shard Description: Beautiful pale blue Icewing with black eyes Family: One brother in the school Personality: Fiery and gets angry all the time, has a strong hatred for Seawings and Sandwings, loyal and determined. Her motives can be questioned though. Crush: In the beginning is smitten with Block but never shows it, later falls for Eagle hard. Mudwing: Name: Block Description: Big, muscular male Mudwing, kind brown eyes, one long, thin scratch across one eye, making him blind in one Description: Since he was wounded and blinded he hasn't ever wanted to fight, is always trying to calm Shard down, he is calm, loyal, and peaceful. Crush: Views everyone as a friend. Skywing: Name: Eagle Description: Orange male Skywing Personality: Has a very dark mind, is pessimistic, doesn't trust other tribes, but has a good heart in truth. Crush: Shard (Past), Beam Sandwing/Nightwing: Description: Looks like Sunny except for the eyes, which are blue. Personality: Very cheery and go-lucky, friends with everybody, sometimes can be shy Crush: Eagle Friends: Best friend is Block, Eagle gets jealous of this sometimes You don't need to have these characters. |
frostbiteicewing chapter 2 . 6/18/2015 Um...I'm pretty sure you meant dragon, but why would Inferno hurt people, or, technically, scavengers? |
Mango chapter 2 . 6/17/2015 Name: Mango Age: 5 years Gender: Female Species:Rainwing Appearance:Usually blue with yellow patches Personality: Mango is feisty-er than your normal Rainwing, she has a let parrot named Luca that talks. History: Was attacked by a young Mudwing when she pretended to be a seagull(she had been one year old) Crush: She likes a Rainwing named Jaguar-Jaguars funny and smart and he likes her back Friends: Mangos BFF is her parrot Luca, who speaks dragon ands always knows what adventurous Mango is thinking. |