My favorite has to be the Latias pokehuman.

could be worse, could be better. tis kinda cliche but overall okay.

Your brother [the absol on miiverse] recomended your story and i like it so far. you should read hillian links fanfictions. they are also pokéhuman.

Me: Wait! *Makes 400 holograms of your brother and 49 clones* Ok here you go *Shoves them all into your room* Bye *Biomerges into DarkMegaGargomon (Because I had a DarkTerriermon) Charcher through the roof and flies away*

I like the concept, but the story seems a bit rushed. If the story is only going to be a few chapters, you'll be fine. If not, you should probably flesh out your characters a bit more. Anyway, great job so far. Keep up the good work.

Great story but I was wondering if they would meet a wise and old pokehuman to learn how to use their move and eventually evolve... Wait can pokehumans evolve?

Interesting, a Riolu and Absol Pokehuman. Riolu may be my favorite Pokemon, but I like Absol quite a lot too. Other than that, I'd like to know if this will actually have a plot that does not eventually go in to a trainer challenges league plot, as way to many Pokemon fan-fiction tend to due, an actual antagonist would be a good and one that is not overused would be better especially if they're actually competent. I honestly can't wait to see what happens next in this story, keep it up!

Please add a Latios Pokéhuman.