Cute and nice story.

will any of the heroic spirits or characters appear? the holy grail as in the holy grail war?

i have the urge to watch monty python and the holy grail now...

i actually love this idea,i cant wait for the next chapter
quick question though: is the pairing going to harry and hermione?, as u can tell from my username i ship those two so much i Titanic them.

Your Luna is pretty good, the dialogue runs nicely and doesn't bog down. No spelling errors and good grammar, too. I have no idea how this is supposed to be a FSN crossover, but I'm curious enough to stick with it.

One thing I felt I could point out:

Generally when writing long monologues, and you need to break it up to avoid having huge blocks of text, you don't have a quotation mark at the end of the first paragraph. So the reader doesn't think "Oh, Luna stopped talking" and when the next paragraph begins with a quotation mark they usually think "Oh, Harry started talking, oh, no wait, still Luna."

By not having the first paragraph end with a quote but having it in the beginning of the second, you have them thinking "Oh, Luna is still talking, but there was a slight pause." or something to that effect.

Example:
"CHARACTER A TALKING CHARACTER A TALKING CHARACTER A TALKING CHARACTER A TALKING.

"CHARACTER A TALKING CHARACTER A TALKING CHARACTER A TALKING CHARACTER A TALKING."

A lot of the fics I like use this and as a reader I think it works very well to keep my attention from straying and keeping me in the scene.

lol nice start.

well good thing is harry is lucky... cause he will need it when things start to go crazy the luna way.

Nicely written.