i like the idea of this fic, it's just that Dark gets wrecked at every turn i mean i know he had no one to teach him but come on! after a year he should at least be able to handle his own villains by him self. i like professor 9 hes cool. but the main problem i have with this fic is Dark getting run over at every turn D:

I still want to know what happened to the original Gambol Shroud's pieces. But other than that, awesome way to end a chapter.

So when do you think the people from Remnant will actually get back to Remnant?

The romance wasn't necessary, but this is going pretty well nonetheless.

Galaxy wars, did you get that from Drake & Josh or ICarly

Interesting so far.

It's cool but the dialogue is weird. Some of it is all bunched up. It needs to be separated, like:

"I keep telling you! It. Is. Magic!" said Dark-Warrior.

"And I keep telling you!" responded Professor 9, "It. Is. Science!"

Other than that, I think it's great and I will look forward for more in the future.

Oh, abd don't forget about Neopolitan.

I do like to see more of this. I do hope Team JNPR and CFVY are here too. Imagine Team RWBY's reactions when they see Sean (a.k.a. Dark-Warrior, in secret) all bruised up? I do wonder if Sean has a few good friends or not, besides Mr. Stan? Lastly, I'd love to see Team RWBY (and later JNPR and CFVY) goes to Sean's school.

How about do another "RWBY ended up on Earth" story? This time, it is the Earth we knew, not Sean's Earth. And it will not be Sean, but another male protagonist OC. This is optional.

I like this so far, keep up the good work! You have pretty good grammar, but there are a few errors with spelling and random left over letters in some places, but those are easy to fix. :P Aside from that the stories interesting and I've noticed that you've taken some inspiration from Spiderman with Sean missing the bus and running after it, as well as the bully thing, which is a good touch I guess. :P

that was great

An interesting start, if a bit rushed. It's too early to tell about this fic, but it has at least caught my interest.

Special thanks goes to FireKitsune1 for helping me edit this story