Please write more.

I love this story already! I adore The Blue Lagoon and Everlark, and this fic places those two amazing subjects together. I can't wait to read the next installment! Please update soon.

This is a beautifully written piece. I enjoy your little ties to the hunger games story like the berries and the mutt monkeys! I would love to read more if you choose to continue! - owl singer️

This is a fantastic start! Please continue!

Update!

I hope you update this. Sounds like the beginning of a great story

Always been a fan of this movie...looking forward to the next chapter.

It was a really awesome start and I also love the movie.

I absolutely love this! Please continue! Your writing style is very concise with the characters, and is a joy to read!

This is amazing and I love it.

wow I loved this! I've only heard the synopsis of blue lagoon but never watched it so i'm looking forward to see what happens next!

awe there so cute. And I love the movie.

I absolutely love this movie! It was definetely a creative endeavor to spin it into an HG verse. It was altogether bittersweet and hopeful :(
Are there any plans to continue it? It would be interesting to see them get older and strengthen their bond.

I remember once having a conversation with a friend sometime after Catching Fire about a slightly similar scenario. What if Katniss and Peeta had actually mangoes to R un away from the group? Is it possible that they could have removed their trackers and found their way to a part of the arena undetected and just stayed there? Living off the land together? It was just fans daydreaming, but still makes you wonder :)

Great chapter

oh, this is different but i love it!