WHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD

This was GREAT! Plot twist! Of course it was over food...

My gawd. That was hilarious to me XD.

Anyways, the story was amazeballs.

Luffy you're such a dork. And Ace I think you need to actually ask questions and throw desks after, considering that your little bro is a master dork, not to mention the ultimate cinnamonroll xD

I totally flipped my bed.

ahahahaha what a hilarious misunderstanding and i also knew it was about food

HAHHAHA that was so cute and soooo funny!

I think I laughed harder at this than I should have xD That was pretty damn adorable. I could see Shanks and Rayleigh betting on Luffy, too. Super cute, although there are a few typos. It didn't detract too much from the story though.

Also I think Nami's text from Lola made me cackle. And I never get tired of LawLu or MarAce, so keep up the good work :3

~Mithril

This is adorable! Continuer s'il vous plait? I would love to know what happens next!

You know why marco, because he is really planning on stealing lurfy kisses xD

Haaa, I was confused but now I'm laughing my head off. I should have known

Omg Hersheys Kisses. That is a good one. Very good story!

I was like "LOL" at the end! HERSHEY'S KISSES! And Law didn't bother to correct Big Brother Ace about it! Haha!

Yahahahahaha~~~~ You don't know how did this made my day! It even made me fall-roll on the floor laughing hard! Haha!

Good luck on your other stories~!

That was hilarious!