| Reviews for The Betrayed Rises |
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   MUILucario chapter 3 . 7/30 And said Lucario looks like Goku when he goes Super Saiyan. |
| ggboys chapter 6 . 7/16 is this turning into a fighting anime |
| HellDragon1705 chapter 8 . 2/3 So Flareon pissed him self |
| The Commentator chapter 4 . 12/11/2019 Chapter 4 Report Paul: Infernape can’t use Earthquake! Me: Oh yeah and the Klink line can’t use Gear Grind |
| The Commentator chapter 1 . 12/3/2019 Chapter 1 Report You're an Advanceshipper(Ash Ketchum x May Maple)am I not mistaken? I like Amourshipping(Ash KetchumxSerena Yvonne) too, but I kinda like Advanceshipping too. Anyway, please have lemons! |
| MINI-Toepunt chapter 12 . 11/30/2019 Well, this was a great read! I know, it's been forever since the story finished, but a great read nonetheless! I loved the character development, and the fact you didn't just make all the traitors have something bad happen to em.(Max, if you didn't get my drift) I'll be reading your other stories, good job! |
| Dane7384 chapter 3 . 11/20/2019 Misty let go of togetic in advance generation but still great story |
| Luiz4200 chapter 8 . 11/14/2019 I didn't see that coming. You're good with twists. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/17/2019 10 |
| Stormshadow13 chapter 13 . 8/11/2019 Fun story. |
| Flenners fanfics chapter 7 . 8/10/2019 red vs serena if serena meant whore! |
| Dane7384 chapter 1 . 7/31/2019 This is an amazing advanceshipping story |
| RonanTheAccuser chapter 18 . 7/29/2019 please don't delete this story, i love this one |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 17 . 6/5/2019 the betrayed legend sounds best |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2019 My obvious answer is definitely ash x may advance shipping all the way |
