I hope this is being continued. Its really good and that cliffhanger kills me.

To answer thy question: uttter doom. And NEVER say that; it always taboos everything.
By the way, since you say you want OCs:
Name:Heather Chanceller(goes by her nickname "Silverhawk", though)
Race:Human female
Description: shockingly white hair, with brown at the base, though, icy blue eyes, about 4ft.6 in height.
Class: Hunter; Bladedancer
Preferred armor(if you want): Personally, I picture her in all Tekome ranger gear, with Ayane Teknome's cloak, and the...uhhh, I forget what the shader was called, but it's mostly blue and black, with bit of red here and there.
Preferred weapons(if you want):Handcannon: Renegade MK.33("my knight in shining armor; Ol' Reliable, I call it"), or Hawkmoon. Sidearm: Vestian Dynasty. Bazooka: A little something out of her own twisted imagination, dubbed; The Sparky-Sparky Boom-Boom Stick(black and TARDIS blue, with the name tapped on the side in obnoxios, bright yellow lettering).
Personality: Think Cayde, but worse. Like, 'slapstck humor on steroids' worse. Just read my fic about her; that should give you a pretty good idea.
Catchphrase(why not?): (when fighting Fallen and/or making an escape) "Seyonara, suckers!"*flips the bird(occasionaly)*, "Hasata le vesta, butt-faces!"(cuz Hive and Fallen are just that ugly some times; ESPECIALLY the Hive).

Hope you like her!
...please don't kill her. Oh, and she tends to where a very bright red fedora no matter what sooooo...
*suddenly realizes that she hasn't been logged in this whole time, laughs nervously, wringing hand*
By thw way, my username is Jayfeattheris Awesome, the double "t" is not a typo.

Awesome chapters! I have an OC

Species: Fallen; Type: Noble Captain. Formerly part of House of Wolves
Name: Noctis Umbra (NightShade) Likes to be called Noctis (Night)
Ability: Stealth and Defense
Weapons: 2 arch swords and shock rifle
Appearance: A normal Captain, but her cape is Blue. She is taller than normal captains. Her Eyes glow red instead of yellow. Has a Golden belt. She also has a Last World on her belt that was stolen from a guardian.
Position: Battlefeild captain.
Personality: Hard-headed. Doesn't take any excuses for failure. But, she has a small good side. She helped a guardian escape the Prison of Elders. She hates the Vex and Cabal. She hates guardians, but will let some live.
( You can make changes)

OC:
Species: Fallen, Dreg.
Name: Greg.(changes may apply)
Abilities: very fast and agile, as well stealthy.(ish) (changes may apply)
Weapons: Shock dagger, scorch cannon.( changes may apply) (maybe shrapnel launcher.)
Position: Archons servant. (Changes may apply)
Personality: a bit arrogant, but not too much. First line of loyalty is Archon priest, then kell and then Prime. Hates hive, and anything non-king related. Likes the house of kings, the archon priest and pasta. Often makes puns and has a rivalry with a baron.
Appearance: bit bigger then normal dregs, but has three arms, allowing for more versatility. Has a little bit different color scheme then normal house king dregs, maybe reversed? Oh! And carries a skull of a hive on his belt. (Thus his arrogance.)

You may change whatever you wish.

We are in approval of your choice of setting.

The relationship these to have is so cute. I hope in the next chapter you show Rikantor worrying for "Her" Archon

I hope you update soon! I love the long chapters! It bugs me when an author posts an update and it's really short. I'm super ready for the coming together of the "unlikely companions." I really want to see how that plays out!

I loved it
Please update soon!

Sorry this review took as long as it did! I had attempted to really sum up my thoughts on every single plot point while busy writing my own story and dealing with real life, but that would have taken more words than this chapter so I ditched my draft review three times until I arrived at this. Overall, I still think that better use of line breaks would do your story's readability some good, and a couple of phrases such as "sucking up her gut" were odd, but those were minor.

Anyway (and this is more important) consider me racked with nervous anticipation as to how the Fallen characters may be forced to work with the Guardians (who didn't get much face time this chapter as someone else pointed out, but I didn't mind this as much). And as always, I really like the developing and nuanced relationship between Rikantor and Sorkolis, and your absolutely top notch style for description and characters' voices.

Another solid chapter.

It's nice to see that the main plot is getting underway - you know with the Hive and that. I really loved the Kings taking on the Devil's Lair, I thought it was a very well written action sequence.

The only thing I wasn't a fan of was the lack of Ravenwood's involvement in this chapter. We've haven't had any material from him in this chapter, at all. I see what you're doing, alternating between each viewpoint with each new chapter, and I appreciate that. All I was wondering was that maybe you could start alternating perspectives at least once in your chapters, particularly when Sorkolis and Ravenwood's (and possibly Nyx!) are taken to the Deep. It helps the reader to digest your chapters a little easier, especially when they're as long as yours, plus it keeps the action flowing.

The ending almost made me cry. ;-;

Looks like the Hive and the Devil Banner are becoming a bigger thing in the Kings' world. My story about Shannu is coming along nicely though. I love it when he's mentioned.

This is my favorite chapter so far. Continue the good work!

I rrrrreeeealllllyyy like the Kell, Rikantor.
And I realllllly like Sorkolis, too.
I love both of them togethertheymakemehappyomigosh

I just one-spaced fangirled. So yah.

-Fallen Path of Evil

I read the first chapter and it seems to be heading in a good direction, so all I will say is continue writing it for the one that love this type (even if it's not for me).

This seems interesting. I don't know anything about the game, though, but it sure looks cool.

Sorry about not reviewing this sooner. I liked the interplay between the characters during this chapter, and the dialogue aside from some awkward word choice here and there. I'm very intrigued by the arrival of the new Guardian, Ravenswood and Nyx being forced to work together, and the direction of the story in general. I may even submit an OC after reading again. Keep it up!

Great chapter! Loved it. You had me hooked on every word. There were no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes, which is very good to see in an author. As I said before though, Snow's serial number changes a couple of times in the first half of the chapter, but it's no biggie. Anyway, love it, love your writing, and please keep on doing this story.

Reilly