love it, pls continue this Story!

I know your probably busy but this is one of the best stories I have read in a long while. If you ever find the time, maybe you could take another look. If you need any help with ideas I’d be happy to bounce them around with you if you want.
All in all, I loved this and hope you continue this!
~KitoH

Thanos: "I am inevit-"
Tony: "Did you know that the sparrows fly south for the winter"
Thanos: "Wha-"?
Tony: Takes infinity gauntlet. Knocks Thanos unconscious.
Loki: "I GET IT! It works. You can STOP now!"
Tony: "hehehe..."

It's been over a year. are you coming back?

I love this! Its a great AU... I really think you need to write an uninterrupted section of Loki explaining what happened and Thanos IN FULL. Also a heartfelt moment with Loki sharing his torture with Anthony would be good also.

I just love your story! I hope you can finish it becouse it's a masterpiece! :3

Best story ever XD

Took me about a week, but now I have finally caught up.
Wasn't to sure about tony and Loki at first, but they're the most adorable couple :3
Love your story, can't wait for more.
Also, could that van had had any worse timing... XD

please continue rigting i love this story it is so good please update soon as possible

Wonderful story. Please don’t wait a year to update.
I would love to see throw their relationship progresses on Earth, and how Stark takes back his company. And what his new longevity plays in on his role on Earth.

Late review but it's cause I'm lazy. Also, I've been catching up with all the new MCU movies (like Black Panther and Infinity War). I swear, my day had brightened when I saw the update.
Chaos: Can confirm.
Night: So, let us start the review!

Tony "did nothing wrong and kicks ass" Stark
200/200
As usual, this Tony Stark kills me because how similar he is to actual, canon Tony Stark. Did I mention I love him?
Erebus: Several times.
Yudai: It's kind of cute how often she says it.
Anyways, Tony gives this chapter 100 more points to this chapter because of his selfless act of taking the nuke, his treatment of Banner/Hulk (science bros!), his reaction to Stane (more on that later) and the ship (more on that later).
300/200
Tony became my favorite character in the Avengers because of the nuke thing so seeing it written down with his emotions and thoughts was so cool!
[Remembers Thanos] *screeches*
Erebus: Oh boy. I agree with Loki.
Yudai: Well, I'm an optimist like Tony so I believe they can defeat Thanos.
Erebus: Yudai darling . . .
Yudai: Yes, dar- You're doing the Loki thing!
Erebus: Ah, Earthlings.
I can't wait how that argument ends. In the meantime, they should reconcile. Now, it's Lokes turn to get reviewed.

Loki the Boyfriend Material
200/200
My aestheticLoki caring for Tony.
Have I already mentioned how cute Loki is? Many times? Well, hear it again.
Night: How cute of Loki to tell Tony not to be reckless. Loki is the epitome of reckless.
Loki is a realist who dates (wait. . . Are they still dating?!) an optimist.
I really want Loki to talk to Tony about his time with Thanos so he can be better. I worry for him. It'd be nice for him to talk to anyone. Also, a reconciliation with Thor would be nice.
Loki and Hawkeye get along so well. (Read: sarcasm)
Again, Loki caring for Tony, including with the whole Stane thing(more on that later) is my aesthetic. Please let Loki be happy 2K18.
Night: That would certainly be a nice thing.

The Avengers! (:D)
230/200
I love the Avengers. From Hulk who saved Tony, to my man Captain America (can't go wrong with Steve), to Bruce who is such a darling, to Clint who is actually pretty funny (I missed you, Hawkeye) and to Natasha who should become buddies with Loki.
Tsubasa: Why?
For scientific purposes. Can't wait to see more of the team later on because I think they're great.
Tsubasa: Okay, I agree with you there. It's enjoyable to see them interacting with our two leads.
AVENGERS ASSEMBLE!

F**king Stane (Chaos: *angrily curses in Greek*)
100/100
Chaos: *after reading that Stane died* I am NOT satisfied with this outcome. I paid for blood. For revenge. FOR TONY TO MAKE STANE SUFFER!
I'm with Chaos, I'm just less maniacal and homicidal in my thoughts (Chaos: Ha!) Even if Tony hadn't killed him, I would've been happy if he was able to resolve that whole thing and gotten justice. I mean, Tony suffered so much before reaching Loki (and he still suffered there but not by Loki's hand) because of him and he died like that? I'm upset about it like Tony but I'm not hung up over it.
Chaos: I am.
I'm aware.
Chaos: I'm going to bring him back and kill him myself.
Chaos, no!

The Ship (please stop hurting me with it)
1200/500
Good news for me: The Ship didn't hurt me this chapter! (*cue clapping and cheering*) In fact, I was happy. The two are so cuuute together. I may have several ships in the Marvel fandom but FrostIron is still my OTP. Sold to the Devil is canon. Infinity War totally didn't happen.
Sasha: Are you OK? Still suffering from Infinity War?
One of my favorite interactions from the OTP:

[He nudged Loki. "Give me your cape." The prince blinked at him, brows furrowed, and Tony made a grabby motion with his hands. "Today, Lokes."

Loki raised his eyebrows at the inventor's tone, but nodded. "Of course," he replied with a nod].

Super funny and cute. And they're not too cheesy. They fit so well together. Ah, my shipper heart.

Chapter score:
91998766433200/1200
(Yeah, it broke again. I hit it when I saw the update and flapped around like a maniac).

Thank you so much for this chapter. You made my day. I'm really glad you didn't forget this great story. I'm excited over what's going to happen next.
Chaos: Let's see each other soon!
P.S. - see you in tumblr!

- Whims of Anime (and the Precious Gang of Tamers and Holy Beasts)

Yessss good to know you plan on finishing it! Even if I didn't mind the wait, year long gaps between updates were a hit much haha. Love your work, as usual, and I say good riddance for Obie, honestly... though is he dead really? heh looking forward to the next chapter!

Good on Tony for being the bigger person with Obadiah, but still, he did deserve closure.

Also it would have been great for Obadiah to find out that no, Tony is still not dead and he now has the ability to get revenge on him.

I'll be interested to see how things play out, now he's been gone for so long and would be out of touch with how the world has changed.

Thank you for the update! I loved reading this chapter. I’m so glad Tony survived the portal, I wasn’t too sure after that cliffhanger. Anyways, keep up the amazing work :)

A magnificent piece of writing! A truly amazing story that I hope you decide to continue writing one day!