Reviews for Family Comes First
That1Weeb chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
Loved this fic so much it was truly beautiful, no complaints here.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2019
To be honest, the writing is good, but England is OOC. I could never imagine England not considering America family. Sure they might not be blood related, but they are family. Blood doesn’t make family at all. Family chooses family. England chose America, and America chose England. There was even an episode of England getting flustered about someone calling them brothers and that calling him big brother was flattering him. They were in Africa at the time. Also England was always bullied by his older siblings. I honestly can not imagine England choosing Scotland over America epesically because he almost never talks about him. England even step upped to Russia about crushing America, and he has older sibling worry dreams about America getting hurt. Either way, I did enjoy the other parts of the fic. I do think America would act like that if someone tried to deny his brother bond with England. That was spot on in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
OliveOil's chapter 2 . 6/9/2017
Im kinda upset at this, One: from the looks of it, Scotland has never once showed up to a world meeting and he even said that he hasnt been to one in decades. Its honestly not fair for him to show up out of thin air and say its his seat, brother or not. And if Scotland can even bitch about America's Independence, because he wanted that too at times. And to be frank Scotland and England has an infamous history of TONS of wars. The reason the UK was even made was to stop all the war and bloodshed between them. Two: Im mad at how childish these two acted, if i were England i would have slapped them upside the head and told them to sod off. Three: Really England? Wow that was a real douchebag way to treat America. You pretty much just took a big shite on the relationship you two built up over the past years. I guess WW2 didnt mean shit to you, huh. I feel bad for America yet again disapointed at how he acted. Bottom line is: Fuck all three of you. I literally would punch you all. Nice going dickheads. Also author, good job on this story it was well made.
Also congrats, you are one of the few people whos stories made me get rifled up. But just because im rifled up doesnt make this story bad. Good job.
Mystery chapter 2 . 11/15/2016
I like the story but Scotland doesn't have a right to come back and claim "his" seat. I mean if you like your seat so much show up to the damn meetings don't be upset when someone who's not a blood brother is closer to your brother than you could ever be. If they're not close to England it's their own faults.
Mystery chapter 2 . 11/13/2016
I get their blood brothers but I honestly thin England would choose America over those two. I'm just going off of facts England never really talks about his big brothers and their attitudes are jerky towards him. 2nd of all put family first. Did they put family first every time they bullied England as a kid.
Camikazi chapter 2 . 9/1/2016
I liked your story a lot. There isn't too much about this group of siblings. Though I feel really bad for America. England did basically raise him so I imagine America does care, independent or not. Canada too but to maybe to a different extent. I could imagine Alfred resting his head on the desk looking with a heartbroken expression at Arthur interact with his other brothers. The fact that he hasn't actually met them or been properly introduced to them by Arthur means something in my head, maybe one side doesn't matter as much as to warrant an introduction to the other. Great story again 10/10 read this twice
teabrows chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
"Sure the guy was well built and handsome but so were most nations."

- Scotland

If only he could say it to America's face! Lmao.

Why is this so underrated? This deserves more love and attention. And reviews. Providentia67, thanks for sharing your story. Thanks for writing this and thanks for sharing your ideas through this. This is quite enjoyable, with minimal grammar errors and an interesting plot. About time for the Scot to show up
teabrows chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
I feel more bad for Canada. Imagine your own brother, your own flesh and blood, from the same womb of the same mother, deny your relation and even have the gall to forget your own existence, practically in front of the whole world. That must feel like a punch in the gut, multiplied a hundred times. Poor Canada.

Or maybe he's used to it?
Victoria H chapter 2 . 3/8/2016
Wow, I must say, this story really hits close to home for me. And family DOES come first after everything! Why does nobody I know understand that? Blood runs thicker than water after all.

Good job!
Stormy1412 chapter 2 . 12/8/2015
I honestly thought the fighting between America and Scotland was going to go WAY down hill sometime. I can see England protecting his family like that. I must admit, for an American, I was completely rooting for Scotland to win.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
ONLY TWO REVIEWS?! What the hell? This is amazing, and you should feel amazing
FreakyFrenzy12 chapter 2 . 6/18/2015
I love the idea that the chairs mean status to the nations! That's so creative and creates a good story! Good job!
VerlorenFate chapter 2 . 6/15/2015
I'm really shocked that this hasn't got a review yet to be honest o-o It's a great two shot and it's really well written xD They weren't out of character and I could imagine this happening x3 so kudos!