| Reviews for This Christmas |
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OurSongSweetcheeks chapter 10 . 4/29 i loved this story! |
OurSongSweetcheeks chapter 9 . 4/29 i loved this chapter, was so nicely written |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23 Okay I want to like your story but so many details are out of order! |
scarlettangel11 chapter 10 . 2/2 I adore Charmione and I love love love this story and everything about it- character development, pace, storyline. All! Thank you for writing it! |
Dreamystranger chapter 10 . 7/22/2019 Such a sweet story! :) I loved the idea with the locket and how you included Charlie in the happenings of the original story. The slow built-up of their feelings for each other was so cute to read. :) Thank you! |
A friend chapter 10 . 7/27/2018 Cute |
tigersmeleth chapter 10 . 9/21/2017 Love the format of the story, and you gave lovely snippets of their relationship over the years. |
WizardWriting chapter 10 . 5/19/2017 Great story! I liked how Charlie and Hermione grew closer together over time, as well as Charlie noticing the age difference between the two. My only criticism would be directed at the later chapters, in which I felt too much was taking place within each one, that you resorted into "telling" the reader what was going on, instead of "showing." However, that was only a minor misstep. Again, great job! |
harmonious chapter 10 . 5/10/2017 Time to get you to 70 reviews! Cute story! Great pace and I loved the couple. They really interacted well with each other and were believable. |
Grahamgirl93 chapter 10 . 5/1/2017 Very good... |
billweasley07 chapter 10 . 3/1/2017 I love the story; although their are some spelling mistakes or words missing or in typed twice or maybe even in the wrong place. Other than that liked I said in the begging I love the story! |
Amara chapter 9 . 1/21/2017 EVERY DAMN TIME! You'd think that by now I'd be used to reading about Fred's death but no; it still gets me every time. |
ILoveHarryPotterForever chapter 10 . 6/23/2016 Very nice! I enjoyed this story a lot. Charlie is adorable :) |
GillianLSteele chapter 10 . 6/11/2016 This is an awesome story! I love Charlie and Hermione stories. One of my favorites. |
Blue-10-Spades chapter 1 . 3/3/2016 Ahhh, I love Hermione with Charlie, but I especially love it when she's still in Hogwart's. Something about the age gap/forbidden romance appeals to me :) |