huh. it's hard when you don't know what's real.
nice writing!

So awesomely creepy! What better way to make someone a puppet than to drown them in dreams? Horrifying to lose reality-the brief glimpses just make it worse-and then to end with the wish that the true awakening is just a dream... Very well done.

"Cloud had shoved his crush so far back into the closet that he would've had to have been in Narnia to find it again."
That's somewhat world-immersion breaking, but funny as fuck.

wow, this was such a wild terrifying ride to read - Cloud doesn't know what his reality is and as the reader I didn't know either! XD Everytime he kept "waking up" I was "oh shit not again" LOL anyway point is, this was brilliantly written! puppet cloud ftw (this is murasaki sunshine btw haha)

Didn't feel like logging in XD.

But holy shit this was amazing- the perfect balance of creepy and surreal. Gave me goosebumps, especially the end of the bedroom scene, and Aerith. Still have chills from reading it, amazing work.

I'll be stalking you and this story. hehe