| Reviews for Iridescent |
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acetwolf94 chapter 8 . 6/15/2019 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! I'M HOOKED! |
Forbidden Moons chapter 8 . 9/20/2018 Looking forward to more! |
Forbidden Moons chapter 7 . 9/20/2018 This is still one of the most well-written Voldemort stories in existence. |
Elaine302 chapter 8 . 9/19/2018 I really love this story. It's such a dark twist, and wonderfully written. Keep up the great work. |
fowlgirl19 chapter 8 . 9/19/2018 Aaaaahhhhhh I love love LOVE everyone. Especially Bella! |
Soju Boy chapter 5 . 4/10/2018 This chapter was absolutely brutal and I loved every moment of it! The imagery here was superb especially in the last few scenes near the end. The length of the chapter was a bit intimidating but totally worth the read. As usual, excited for the next chapter! |
Soju Boy chapter 4 . 4/9/2018 Another solid chapter! I'm enamored with the language you use in your writing, but it does tend to drag out a bit in a few areas. You did a great job in humanizing Voldemort especially with how he interacts with Vera. Thus far Vera is just the right amount of fierce and playful to counteract Voldemort's coldness. I'm excited to read the next chapter~ |
HisRedRose123 chapter 7 . 3/18/2018 Oh my Lord, this fanfic is incredible! The writing is so beautifully crafted, poetic almost, and the story itself is so unique. I can’t get enough of this. I first found this story on AO3 and, seeing as there was only four chapters, immediately came here to satisfy my need for more content haha. I know it’s been a while but I really hope you update soon 3 |
Soju Boy chapter 3 . 1/2/2018 Once again, a great chapter! Oh it was awesome. I loved the tenderness that was present throughout the entire chapter. And that ending, I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work~ |
Soju Boy chapter 2 . 12/29/2017 Solid chapter! Your way with words is masterful. My favorite part was all the world building that was present in this chapter from description of the old ways to Slytherin manor. I'm excited to see where this is goes~ |
Soju Boy chapter 1 . 12/26/2017 This is a really strong beginning you've written~ Your descriptions are really detailed and I love the way you describe intangible feelings/things, with my favorite being the last paragraph. One of my favorite phrases in this piece is "Oh Salazar" because it really feels like an in-universe thing to say akin to other wizards saying "Merlin's beard". I wish there was more about the character's stay in Azkaban but overall the first chapter is strong and I cant wait to read the rest of it~ |
Cholo Palai chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 You take too much time to update. This story is good but a bit slow. |
TJeanetteT chapter 7 . 7/30/2017 Beautiful imagery. The flow was occasionally odd but I liked it despite that. |
Torn chapter 7 . 7/23/2017 Yes, that's what I am feeling while reading this piece. Obviously, it's by far one of the best writing I've read on this site so thank you so much for sharing your creative talent and you should make your own original work. However, I would like to point out that while I do enjoy your eloquence I believe it's already too much and simply dragging on the story. A balance between dialogue and description would have been much better since at the times, reading purely descriptive sentences tend to be boring. |
TheLycoris chapter 7 . 6/25/2017 Another wonderful set of chapters and wonderful writing as usual! the introductions to the new characters has got me very excited for more chapters though of course I loved reading Voldemort's and Vera's interactions and look forward to more too. I can't wait to see where you are taking this story! |