Hey can I use the name Skylla rose Lockwood for a pice of fan art?

Xander35:

Well... Heres the next part! I do wanna say that I'm probably going to say good job alot, but when I do I really REALLY mean it. This is such a great story and I do hope you'll continue.
Anyways this story is so great and I love what you did. We need to make a pention or something to make you the owner of the series since you can clearly do just as well (who am I kidding? WAY BETTER!) than the writers.
As much as I want you to come back and finish I dont want you to drop the quality of this book, so please take your time.
This book is now more cannon than the actual show btw (lol).

I'm thinking (even though the show isnt exactly cannon, they got some details wrong because its a kid show [lol]) that the reason Ryder was able to except Rubble so easyly in the the show (unlike the rest of the pups in this story) is because something happens to W.O.O.F. (still don't know where the canines comes in) so they don't want to continue the P.A.W. Patrol program. But due to overwhelming support Ryder is able to make the P.A.W. Patrol independent. Thats my theroy.

On an unrelated note. Have you ever watched the show "Voltron: Legendary Defender"? The pups personality's seem to corrispond to each of the palidens. Just me? My crossover senses are ting-a-ling...

Perhaps my crossover sensers are off but my ship train one isn't! TOOT TOOT! Gotta be honest, I love chase x skey. I'll get more into that later though.

Well... its time to rap this up! Hope to see another chapter or something soon!

i really enjoy all of your story of how all the paw patrol met so far and i want to know how much longer will it be until you tell us about Zuma

i really like the stories of how all the other pups met Ryder could you please write a story of how Zuma became part of the group thank you

Xander35

Hello! Great story! I actually made a really long comment (longer than any you had yet, i think), but it didn't post :/. I tried coping it but that didnt exactly work so I'm starting from scratch! I think my comments will be broken up into four parts, the first being this one, the second being about stuff about your story in general, the third being reviews for each of your storys and the forth being how I see your characters. Since this will take awhile, I won't comment them all imme

I truly have really really really really really really really really LOVE IT! I lose all track of any other thought when I read it! So detailed, so lovely and let me just say, you are doing a great Job! The back rounds seem really logical too! It makes a lot of sense! I really couldn't have thought of it better! Now, I am only dying to hear how Zuma joins after Rocky, and that's another thing, the order the paw Patrol forms and how Ryder is very very smart makes total since too! Also, why the pups act the way they do makes total since to with their back round stories. Honestly, This is a supercalifragilisticexpialidocious story! Please finish it! I cannot wait to see the next chapter!

Wow just wow these stories were absolutely amazing I loved every dam second of them I’m just sad it had to end but still thank you for at least making these amazing chapters

Oh my god I cried so hard reading this chapter god

OH CRAP!

Wow that was an amazing first chapter

will you be continuing this story? I very much enjoy this story. I also had a question, do all the pups have middle and last names in this story you created?

please update soon

Thank you for making me cry. It’s 2am and I’m crying in bed. Really though, your work is amazing. Thank you for sharing it with the world. :) and Happy New Year!

Muy interesante el capitulo pero a la vez tragico pero me gusto mucho y tambien me puse a llorar por la muerte de de hunter y bueno me alegre por que los hermanos de Rocky nacieron bien y eh de suponer que la madre murio si es asi lamento mucho esa perdida, bueno ya me tengo que ir asi que Desgarbiuz se despide dicendo adiós y nos veremos pronto con otro capitulo de esta grandiosa historia y espero que no tardes en subir el otro capitulo que eh de suponer que debería ser el ultimo y si no es así entonces ya debería de fallarte poco,bueno entonces nosvemos.

Oh my goodness you brought me to tears. Poor Rocky.