That was beautiful and heartbreaking. I feel like a horrible person for saying this but I would like to know the story of what happened to them. How they ended up in those positions. Maybe I am a horrible person. Anyway... Thank you for such a breathtaking story and keep up the amazing work.

okay, honestly this was amazing, the way the emotion was portrayed was absolutely beautiful. even though I did cry, a lot, I'd like to thank you for posting this. it wa l

Oh my god, I have to congratulate you on this becuz not many people can convince me that someone is actually dead with a story and let alone make me tear up about it, so good job!

im literally balling... thank you for making me ball... bitch... JK! gurl (or boy) you fabulous!

That was... depressing but correct. Thank you for writing.

Why Why Why? You made me cry! I am saying it again! Though you already know because I told you

Can't say I'm happy with the ending. You killed them. Now you have to find a way to bring them back. I hate crying.