This chapter had people looking at me like I was crazy. I was laughing so hard that I began crying. It was great.

Of course I don't hate it, I love it! A threesome in fanfics - to me, at least - is perfect for when you can never decide which guy gets the girl :) And if the guys end up being interested in each other later on, so much the better!

You made it realistic and sweet, but not sappy. Not easy to do, but you did it! Kudos!

Neji is hilarious. I love how he didn't wear his heart on his sleeve but still loved his family.

Well done!

Aww, it ended beautifully! *applauds* Well done! You still managed to capture Neji and Lee's characters perfectly.

But I couldn't help laughing at Lee's suggestion... I'd like to read that very much. Very, very much indeed!

Aww... this race to win Tenten's er... body is at times sweet and at times hilarious :)

I'm really hoping it will happen when she's with both boys at the same time because that's best. And I like the 2 guys still have this little envy thing going on :)

You're doing real good. Trust me, you are. It's not easy to write a threesome with these 3, even without adding their adorable sensei to the mix!

I love how you managed to keep all of them in character no matter whether they're on a mission or training or making out.

You're doing good. And yes, I find it realistic yet very promising :)

This chapter was very good too, but luckily, I wasn't reduced to a quivering wreck of giggles :)

Gai-sensei is awesome! And Tenten is a tenacious heroine. You go, girl!

I'm really, really loving how Neji and Lee support each other. The ending of that fight was gold!

*is crying with laughter so hard that she can barely type anything*

The best -hic- the best part of this -giggle- awesome chapter was the mission -snort-

Gai-sensei is -fall over giggling all over again- so precious!

I was reading a NejixTenten fic where Lee was just a good friend and I suddenly wondered if anyone had made all 3 more than friends (I write it too for other fandoms).

And lo and behold, I found this! A lovely start, the short little scenes were to the point and cute, I was either giggling or squealing to myself :)

This is unique! I've been looking for this type of fanfic everywhere. Thank you so

I think this was great for any story on here this to me is one of the best I have seen I would say in my 100 more hours in fanfiction this is one of the best storys I have seen so yeah you probably won't ever see this but I'm just saying that this is a thumbs up

Oh gosh. Can you just write these three forever? My lord this was lovely just all around from plot and fluff to smut. Awesome job! I loved the questionable relationship of the boys lol, it made for great laughs reading.
I think your idea about a child could make a great potential sequel if you ever felt adventurous :)

That was amazing man it inspired me I have never seen a fanfiction as good as this one man great job keep up the good work and have a good life thumbs up :]

That was wonderfully heartwarming. I'm so fucking thankful to read a fan fiction describing a poly relationship with the drama centering around monogamous partner jealousy issues. What a breath of fresh air! Thank you for taking the energy to illustrate clear consent through all sexual and romantic interactions. Makes me believe other people think consent is sexy too! thank you!

Lol

Kkkk, I imagined it runing out of pages with variations of Neji saying they would not do a threesome again XD