Reviews for Irregulars |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 Update Please |
Alex Emiya chapter 4 . 9/14/2019 this ia a great fanfic is it still continuing? |
ShinyKyu chapter 4 . 4/5/2019 Very nice. It’s quite well written, as the interactions between Minato and everyone else seems almost natural. The idea of having Minato be reincarnated as Tatsuya’s twin brother is a little unique and makes more sense than the usual “he’s free from the Seal and somehow gets into the school/organization without any background” plotline. Really the only suggestion I have is to combine some sentences to smooth it out and add a few more commas here and there. Shame that this seems abandoned. |
Jed Cat chapter 4 . 5/11/2018 i know it's late but please update soon. i love the stort |
Gin chapter 4 . 12/5/2017 I'm know that im years late but please continue |
Alfred chapter 4 . 7/28/2017 Grimhunter, please continue! |
Koa Eton Anatole chapter 4 . 3/25/2017 Just found and read this crossover fanfic of yours and I like it a LOT. Hope you update soon, Froire-san. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/9/2016 update soon! |
ARSLOTHES chapter 4 . 2/12/2016 hope you decide to update this fic again soon |
UniCryin chapter 4 . 2/1/2016 I'm loving this crossover! :D Fav'd! |
ziin chapter 4 . 12/19/2015 it will be nice for tatsuya and minato to have their own scene and fight, so it will feel more like they are more different |
logron chapter 4 . 12/13/2015 Placing tatsuya and minato together every scene will be boring eventually, i am guessing you'll placing both of them in public moral replacing morisaki. |
logron chapter 2 . 12/13/2015 Well that unexpected 3 yotsuba siblings, really unexpected |
zachary2 chapter 4 . 12/8/2015 Good job on your story, I quite like it and it's kind of unique, I haven't read any other stories like this. |
Sceonn chapter 3 . 12/4/2015 Plot failed to take Minato's presence and personality into account. Simply showing him to be different isn't enough, you have to show the consequences of his difference as well. The way many of the interactions played out at school in canon was due to Tetsuya's emotional deficiency. Minato's not like that, he's neither afraid of nor would he avoid conflict. He wouldn't make excuses either. Also he would hold a greater amount of emotional attachment to Tatsuya then Miyuki since you've insinuated that they grew up together separated from her as canon Tetsuya did. Tetsuya wasn't able to understand Miyuki's frustration with how he was treated, Minato wouldn't stand for that kind of treatment even without Miyuki's own input. |