You say that this story has not been abandoned yet it has been four years since the last update.

Daphne is fucking retarded. I scratch that. Every single character is fucking stupid which leaves the only explanation being that the writer is a retarded moron.

it's a fantastic idea for a story. Then I'm really enjoying it working confuses me is that you bounce from third-person to first-person in your sentences.

Ladt 2 chaptrrs were really weak and one before was just retread of memory (that was well done).

4 years no update. Lose the vision? Stay well. Be safe

By the way, 3 people attackomg a Prefect? Where's Snape wgen you nees him to give proper justice. Detention for at leaat a month, scrubbing cauldrons no magic

So no Tracey? No slytherin watching out for each other outside their dorms? Odd taht Daphie was alobe. More osd that ron would not be target of harry's first attack (Ginny, really?), odd he trains everyone to shield those in font and leavss Daphne exposed to three magicals. No shield? Pathetic, minus 50 points for disregard of teammate, plus doghouse this night for abandoning defense of loved one.

Shield hats, etc.. cool
But unlockables... too much fun

What a waste of occlumency lessons...

You described the bloody mess of BUTCHER KNIFE CUTS ( a mere 14 x 5.3 inch blade) across every imch of her face...dripping blood...

... and Harry's only thought is to punish het. Why not Malfoy for his calling card attack in the back?

Isnt the point of a cursed contract is to exact the magical punishment to fit the crime?

Getting his parents bsck. Impossible.
Getting his iwn fsmily. Impossible. Or is it.

Smoothest rransition to a . Nice job with blood oath and that.

Curiosity - Courtesy of..
Pray - pry

Neither, your story has become fucking idiotic.

Don't know if Daphne should or shouldn't get pregnant, however, I do feel that Harry should have a say in this if she wants to go forward. It's not a good thing to be trapped (see Voldemort's dad for an example). I think it's much better if Daphne is able to persuade him that she loves him and wants to do it so he has something to look forward to rather than just deciding to get pregnant on her own...

Excellent chapter!

Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry got the book! Excellent book, that one! I think Harry needs to ignore Snape's advice, though. I don't like the game Dumbledore played with Malfoy in canon. Too many people got hurt by that. Are their lives worth less than Draco's? Especially given who Draco hangs out with? Great job!

Excellent chapter! I think Dumbledore is wrong in his assumptions not to let the truth out about Voldemort. Even if Voldemort killed people, it would erode the support he receives from the Purebloods. Enjoyed the DADA class. Also enjoyed your spin on the first memory Dumbledore shares with Harry. Great job!

If you need a beta for this story - PM me. I'm not the greatest, but I can still help out. I can't see Ron and Ginny being Death Eaters. It goes against too much of their family history, but I can see them being ferociously jealous. I'm actually surprised that all Harry did to the trio was banish them, especially given Ron seriously hurt Daphne. I think some revenge is due there. Excellent chapter! Loved all of the Quidditch and all of the action!