| Reviews for The Path of a Beater |
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  Aveson chapter 3 . 4/14 ~CHEF Well, Kirito was surrounded gamers plus a game developer when he was a toddler... I was surrounded by birds instead when I was a toddler... Which is probably why I can imitate them so well... |
| Careful Observer chapter 2 . 4/13 ~CHEF Tbh, Kirito's avatar looks like it's just the same as himself in real life. |
| GinnyWeasley09 chapter 1 . 10/9/2018 Hey I have read the Marauders years 2 and 3 and I was wondering can you continue the next years? I don’t know if you still write anymore but if you do take that into consideration they are good stories |
 Angron chapter 6 . 5/15/2018 when the next chapter going out? updapte please |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/14/2018 This is actually a pretty interesting story! The grammar is great, the characters are good, and the way you handle the beta test and the outside world. |
| Spartan123465 chapter 6 . 1/7/2018 Great story so far! You’ve done an amazing job with bringing Kazutos back story to life, I really hope to see more updates to this story. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/29/2017 omgthisissogood |
| Perseus46 chapter 6 . 10/24/2017 The premise of a deeper relationship between Kayaba and Kirito is interesting and I liked the higher influence from the IRL. What canon material are you planning to follow and change? I would hope you integrated the main novels and everything from Progressive and onwards. The relationships of characters (especially Kirito/Asuna) must be deeper, see SAO Abridged. Try to alter things so everything is fresh but don't forget that it is a death game and tragedy should happen (just don't kill Asuna or Kirito, anyone else is fair game with good buildup). Involve PoH and all those extra details from Progressive. I am leaving all this advice because the premise is interesting and I enjoy your writing, so keep it up! |
| Tobjur-11 chapter 1 . 10/14/2017 love it hope u update |
| doubledamn chapter 6 . 9/24/2017 With the new more familial and personal connection between Kazuto and Kayaba, please tell me you have something planned for the 'I don't remember why I did this' moment. |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 6 . 9/23/2017 Awesome job |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/23/2017 Good chapter cant wait for the next one keep it up Sir |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/6/2017 Yay |
| Kyuubi-dono chapter 5 . 3/16/2017 This is cool. Update when you can. |
| thecatleader chapter 5 . 2/12/2017 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE |
