This was really good and I liked it a lot

This was deep, it was also slightly depressing, it was wonderfully written as well. Thank you for writing this excellent piece of work :)

~ Azura

wtf? this is actual retarded

Awww that's sad...

Write a song chapter please! I want to see the confrontation

This is so sad...

Wow. That was deep. But seriously, where on Earth do you get these ideas? This is one of my favorite stories. Wait, never mind. I can't say that because all your stories are my favorite. Awesome plot, thank you!

~Jackie

I loved it.

Can you write a second chapter pleas with need khione to make up with Percy and they can be friends again

I-I-I-I can't find words to describe how raw and numb I feel right now. That hit, hard.

Beautiful, but then again, when's one of your stories not been?

Awwwww
I really liked it. It wasn't too depressing, don't worry :)
But this line really hit me for some reason:
"I just didn't expect it to come from you."
It snowed hard that night, harder than it had ever before in the history of the world.

:)
-K

Oh... this is really good. there should be a sequel...

I don't think it was depressing, I actually liked it it's just that... I had never thought much about Khione, though I do like cold better than heat (even if it never snows where I live), and this is a very good insight to her. In fact, I do like Khione, omitting what she said to Leo. More than depressing, I'll say it's bittersweet.

This is incredibly sweetly sad. It is a cute relationship idea, and I enjoy this idea. :)

wow that was depressing it probably is her tears