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This was a wonderful story and I adore how you wrote the characters.

Aw... this is cute, in a slightly heart-breaking way. Thank you for writing.

Me encanta. Fue un buen punto el que Tsuna haya agotado su llama. Ya pensaba yo que te olvidaste de Gokudera. Yo imagino que Tsuna dejo que su llama abrazara a Hayato C:

As expected of Tsuna to care for his Family's wellbeing over his own ;_; And the end is sooo cuteee ;;;; I like seeing Hayoto blushing dhdjdsj it's so adorable ;u;

Loved the short story :)

This was very well done! You had a firm grasp of the main characters, you introduced your minor characters in a way where they were believable and important, and your pacing was good. The story was very cute as well! The familial love was genuine and sweet, while the romance was more subtle and tender. I loved it! It stood very well on its own, but of course I want to see more of Tsuna like this! I think it's a sign that you built the world and characters very well.
On a side note, your writing mechanics were pretty good as well. A few sentences were too long, which weakened a readers understanding of what you said in them. As a whole, however, there were very few mistakes!
Keep up the good work- it was excellent!

This fic makes me smile. Oh, sweet...I love Tsuna's cares for Reborn and Guardians...so cute. Tsuna knows what his dear people need.