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   jaminjess8 chapter 55 . 9/17/2017 Please continue to keep up the amazing work! Its so amazing and I can't wait for kid and ruri to make up! Its hard for me to read netsuke sometimes because i wish it was ruri talking to kaito lol. I really do love this story though so please keep up the amazing work! 3 _ |
| Tsuki chapter 55 . 8/12/2017 Hope you update soon |
| oldspacecadet3 chapter 55 . 12/14/2016 Even so, I still like it the way it is now. |
| KirikaAndo chapter 55 . 12/14/2016 goodluck! thanks for updating on the current story status. cant wait for the re do |
| Samayo Kaze chapter 54 . 9/28/2016 This is awesome! I need the next chapter, you just have to post soon! |
| IbeWildBella chapter 54 . 9/3/2016 Welcome back! My summer was horrible. How about you? Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| bubutterfly chapter 21 . 9/2/2016 Funtom? maybe theres a Ciel and Sebastian here..or a Phantomhive? lol |
| BLINIX chapter 52 . 4/8/2016 I was reading and I spected the usual chest grab, bur ma thought were destroyed when you wrote that at the end XD, Im really looking foward to KIDs reaction :D |
| CallmeEevee chapter 9 . 3/27/2016 I think if you maybe described the setting, the weather, the atmosphere more, it would be less of a linear script, you know? I'd love it if you breathed more life into the words, the characters! Remember, we can't see the picture in your head, or the image you're trying to convey until you bleed it to life with just the right description. Describe what everyone is doing while someone else talks - are their hands figiting? Is the speaker's voice wavering with nervous tension as their face burned with embarrassment in front of their crush? Is their heart hammering in their chest? Is sweat cascading down the nape of their neck as their fingers strain with exertion to hold on to the cliff-face, inches from death? Give it some oomph! w |
| ArlenOfTheMist chapter 52 . 3/24/2016 This whole story is actually quite impressive, nice work! Oh god That author's note though! Lol HumansBoredom either a creative streak or complete weirdness that we might regret later. -Arlen |
| neonkoi chapter 52 . 3/23/2016 OMG T.T Why?! Why!? It's so funny, but WHY?! ANYWAYS, I'll just go retreat into a corner and die. Laughing. Nice chapter, though.. -Neonkoi |
| chibianimefan26 chapter 52 . 3/23/2016 I CHOKED OMFGGGGGGGG WHAT A SURPRISE IM DYING OF LAUGHTER AHAHAHAHA urgh not a emotional rollercoaster please no my weaknesssss cries rats can swim up your toilet? wow please tell |
| Guest chapter 52 . 3/23/2016 Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update again SOON! Thank you! |
| chibianimefan26 chapter 51 . 3/22/2016 ...well i can't say I'm not guilty of wanting to get to the plot again :'))) forgive me- /slapped heh i see the Funtom company - u - |
| bubutterfly chapter 50 . 3/18/2016 it's amazing! And hapy early birthday! |
