This story was breathtaking and captivating and so well written, I was in a flood of tears by the end. Like Dr. Plum, I'm a sucker for romance. I couldn't put it down. Incredible.

I love that plum was trying to create her own following with leaks on the research, I wonder how much longer either of them will deny their feelings, I'm glad sunny and dawn are there to help with research

Things are certainly heating up between marianne and bog, I love that she helped hun out if the date his mum tricked him into, although her determination is amusing,, I laughed at the yoga class part. Great stuff

I don't think I'll ever stop asking Roland to disappear, poor sunny if only dawn realised, the imp outfit wearing rival chemist was a cute way to include it in the story, I can't even hear it and I'm getting weak at the knees at the idea of bogs accent, I really love accents. I love that she gave him an autograph and he was checking her out, and getting a *little* aroused at her commentary. I both adore slow burn and hate it, I go to read slow burn excited for the build up, the back and forth but then I sit here mentally screaming 'JUST KISS' (well kiss again) and want things to speed up, it's probably a sign that I'm a bit masochistic since I keep coming back to slow burn but what can I say, a girl loves what a girl loves

Oh he's got it bad, inviting for a drink, trying to cover up his friendly (or more) act, then calling her without realising that he already had the phone to his ear, I may be melting (and possibly swooning) a little bit. Him helping her when she staggered was sweet and it is most definitely a shrine, evil purpose or not. I can't decide who I want to win, goblin or violet, this eternal tension filled stalemate is pretty great too

I love the idea of Lizzy and Pare! Once again I say Roland please stuff off, but I can't deny I'm glad it lead to Bog inviting Marianne for drinks, that spark of electricity was adorable as was them both hiding their injuries, really enjoying this so far

Stupid Roland just go away, I like that both of twenty are trying to fight the blossoming romance, and that almost kiss was pretty hot. How will things go after she found the tech with dark forest on it, can't wait to see what happens next

As tiresome as the dates must be I do love that griselda hit a sore spot in regards to his feelings, it will be interesting to see how he reacts when/if he finds out that they're the same person. Roland can go sail off into the Bermuda triangle for all i care, I have no pity or remorse when it comes to him, cute zoo date or not. Showing the feeling of respect and admiration for marianne was a nice touch. Good stuff so far

I know they just want to help but honestly it annoys me so much when people don't listen to others, and her family trying to convince marianne that Roland should get another chance annoys me too, where's the love and support guys. I'm glad that things went well in the meeting and do I hint some attraction even when not in villain form

I like the rivalry showed between them when not in hero/villain mode as well, sunny helping marianne is sweet and I like that you've not made him just a lovestruck side character. I've got to agree with marianne, I don't want Dawn out there

I love the incorporation of aspects from the movie used rather well to go with your story, I'm a sucker for some physical fighting between lovers/potential lovers, and that kiss! I didn't think there'd be anything so soon but damn did it work, now for the aftermath

he would rather avoid the pain and injeries... he would take it if he had to but would rather not... LOL

i dislike the political jab no matter which side its on. they story has been amazing so far. i hope it doesnt turn into a political soapbox in the 13 chapters it has left.

Such a fantastic story! I couldn't put it down!

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH DJFJFJF