I actually really enjoyed this. I was sceptical at the start of the series, mainly coz I've found it hard finding FNAF fics I've enjoyed, but I started enjoying it pretty quickly. I really enjoyed the interactions between the animatronics though, and I enjoyed seeing Jeremy get involved, having him survive the bite and having all that trauma stay with him making him very wary of the animatronics (as well as the effects of not having his frontal lobe). I also really liked Springtrap/Vincent and how you did him. Massive force to be reckoned with in the first book, and in this book where he possessed Jeremy? Gosh that was actually kinda creepy and REALLY well done. Imagery was cool and you made it real interesting.

I do wish though that the death of Mike's mother had a bit more importance to it. It was kinda only done to get Mike away from work and to have him fit in with the whole 'you know what it feels like to lose someone' thing. I feel like there could've been a lot more you could've done with it.

Also just for future reference you were using 'brunette' incorrectly. 'Brunette' is the feminine term; the masculine term is spelled 'brunet' (same way with how blonde and blond works, which relating to Jeremy you've been using 'blond' correctly). So when referring to Mike, he's a brunet, not a brunette.

These first two books have been really good so far, and I've enjoyed them a lot. Thanks for the read; it was really good.

I'd say you dumped too much on us rather quickly, but it's good.

In my opinion Vincent is the hero since Fazbear's has caused nothing but pain and misery. Mike should just let Jeremy destroy the animatronics.

The movie is Treasure Planet, without at doubt. Awesome.

The ghosts are interesting.

I honestly don’t think hat adding the Toys into the mix is a good idea. They could cause trouble, as Freddy and the others said.

I like how protective Spring is of Mark. This was a really good chapter.

Oh... THE SHADOWS!

I feel like that employee who was harassing Mike might be a problem.

This was a beautiful story!

Wow this is deep :(

I have a really bad feeling someone dies :(

Very intense chapter!

Another great chapter!

I love the shadows!