Reviews for Betrayal
mumphie chapter 1 . 7/13
Somehow I want the ending from 'Fractured Fairy Tales'.
DONE394 chapter 1 . 5/27
learn how to use the chapter facility properly dingbat!
eeveejacob chapter 1 . 5/9
I liked it! Thanks :)
Eclectica737 chapter 1 . 5/6
Honestly, I would've had Hermione, Narcissa, and Draco rendered unable to have any children so as to end their lines and to make sure they wouldn't raise a hateful generation.
FotoDi chapter 1 . 5/1
Would that it were true.
gabzep chapter 1 . 4/23
Lol Draco and Hermione ended up together! XD
Katherine Rosalie Hale chapter 1 . 2/5
Justice! LOL! Loved it...All of it! Well done!
JadeSpeedster17 chapter 1 . 1/7
This was an okay fic, well written. But, I dislike the fact that some people, who were spelled, easily got off (Ameila being one)
Yet ones who were spelled longer, had been suicidal, were thrown in jail and possibly sent through the veil.

Proof that when you give a FFN writer too much power, they often create plot holes and inconsistency. (And I am one of these people.)
Vanadir chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
good story thank you
SlytherinMonster120 chapter 1 . 12/22/2019
I think the author either had a stroke or they were trying to censor a few no-no words.
Fyrebird85 chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
Great revenge story. The only part that felt "false" to me was Sirius; the rest was completely believable from canon.
12456237-DeleteAccountPlease chapter 1 . 7/27/2019
Wow great story here.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2019
Garbage, just like your whore mother.
Chronic warrior 93 chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
wow I really enjoyed this story
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
You shouldn't have draco and hermione have kids just plain wrong.
For that matter was a lot of hermione bashing (you hate her?) and it seems to me she was not flushed out the spells/potions or did she? a little bit of redeeming couldn't hurt.
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