U need ti make a 2 shot in Zoe's point of view. And tell me how she died. Was it natural, a disease or a wound? What caused her death? Plz respond and tell me cause i really need to know.

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this is a good story it would be great to have Zoe's point of view maybe artemis and Poseidon as well

THIS IS SO TOUCHING YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB

I think you should do more with it its a wonderful idea for a story. I think that a one side of her POV is cool but take it up make something no one else has done. Don't go chaos or order but some of the other primordials would be an idea have Eros playing a game to get her back at the same time have her go through something similar

Make this a two-shot.

I love it!

That was really good. If you want to make it a two shot I support that. Also you should think about writing a full Percy/Zoë fic because you're an excellent writer.