| Reviews for When a collision happens and the fall out begins |
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princessgraciesmummy chapter 210 . 7/5 I will admit that when I first cam across this story I was sceptical as I've read a lot of fifty shades fanfic and a lot of them always start how the original books start but I will admit that once I actually started reading this story I was totally hooked to me it has just the right amount of angst drama and Fluffyness I absolutely love it |
hreetje chapter 246 . 7/1 Are you going to continue this story? |
CupcakeW chapter 215 . 5/8 Jeez! Why they need to f... on Sophie's room? That's so unrespectful. That's their girl daughter room. Horrible! And all those details of food and dinners schedule, just trying to understand all the story. What's the purpose. The beginning was active with the accident and Kate issues. But, now is so long and just a daily narrative. I don't want to let a story unread, but not see the purpose here. |
CupcakeW chapter 210 . 5/8 I think about the CPOS integration here. They are too indifferent between them. Not a team with confident and more than a coworker. Is weird. They don't know each other or grow as team and a friendship. |
CupcakeW chapter 209 . 5/8 Pero se supone que Sophie tiene su propio pajarito. |
CupcakeW chapter 205 . 5/2 Elliot is a millionaire. He can have his own housekeeper. But, this way is to find the woman for Elliot. Good! And why C had ask his security if they can go with them or do something, that's their jobs. For example, Darlene said that she can go is she has some free time, because she has some things to do. Hello, she can do it , if she has a free time. Because she is working that's why she gonna be on NY. Also, Reynolds. He needs to be out at 6pm because his family. I understand they have their compromise and life. But, that kind of work is different. Really, CG is obsessed with the security, but here he is too much considered as boss. Nice. |
CupcakeW chapter 201 . 5/2 Why CG doesn't talk with Elliott he design all the Taylor's cabin and the house was his work. Sawyers can ask him. |
CupcakeW chapter 180 . 4/24 That's a good option. Reynolds stay only two nights. So Steph can be stay in her Apt. |
CupcakeW chapter 179 . 4/24 Well, just one thing about Teddy reactions with just 3 weeks. The babies really don't see until 2 month or more, and can't splash the water like playing yet. So, it's looks funny and tender but not realistic. He is too little maybe when he was 3 month. He is a newborn. Those things and movements are for babies 12 weeks or more. |
CupcakeW chapter 174 . 4/24 Granny is so hilariant. Osh. I am so blushing here. Hahaha. Not filter at all. Good for Ray and Belinda. And Taylor's family, Gail is an excellent person and will be an excellent told mother for Sophie. |
CupcakeW chapter 173 . 4/3 Los bebés no pueden ver nada en realidad hasta casi los tres meses. El tiene solo dos días de nacido no puede estar atento o mirando nada realmente. |
CupcakeW chapter 169 . 4/2 Realmente, es tan fácil para ellos tener la mejor cámara profesional personal. Es irreal está parte, sin ofender. Cualquiera puede comprarse una. Es como parecer torpes en esto y a veces están en lo absurdo como trabajan la seguridad. Es lógico que la dueña del pet shop tuviera un teléfono de Taylor, sería lo lógico pues como su jefe de seguridad y quién hace las gestiones debe dar un número de contacto. No tiene lógica que C le cuestione esto y le reclame a Taylor. Un poco de lógica. Y la firma en este trabajan con Sawyer es como tan mecánica, lo ama pero guarda tu espacio. Otra cosa, si Taylor tiene que salir ellos pueden tener más agentes de seguridad en la casa, Darlene o Reynolds. No sé, a veces todo están mecánico al relatar las situaciones. |
CupcakeW chapter 165 . 4/2 Bueno Ana, puedes leer algunas cosas sobre el embarazo, eres la dueña de un editorial. Hay Miles de libros para leer y aprender sobre las etapas y uno muy famoso "que esperar cuando estás esperando". No hay que esperar que el Dr. lo diga todo. |
lilkathra chapter 127 . 2/23 what was the point in wanting to have a baby when you only want 3 months of quality time baby grow so much and you rather miss it cuz your job is more important |
lilkathra chapter 94 . 2/22 why do people try to push a spending the night apart if i was christian i would have said mom are you from the 1100 why are you trying to force out of date traditions yes i agree i want to see my bride walk down the aisle to me but i will not spend the night apart |