Annabeth wouldn't just show everyone the notebook, and she definitely wouldn't just snoop around. She should know her boundaries. Sure, I definitely don't like her, but even she wouldn't disrespect Percy by revealing his stuff or the like.

woah ! this is soo good and isnt bad at all ! too bad there is no 3rd chapter

The ending is so sweet

aw poor percy

I didn't like it. I loved it. It puts perspective on bullying, and though sometimes we're just teasing, it can still hurt. Though we know that the real Percy doesn't feel that way it's still a really cool. The writing itself was great too. I was a little confuse in the first chapter but the second chapter was sssssssssssoooooooooo good.:-)

*slaps percy*

“We were HURTING you!1!1!1!”

I liked the fic, but Annabeth being abusive was uhhhh d.

Hello there! Your poem? Just beautiful. I was going 'wow wow wow' from the first line, it's really a good one.

I kind of got ticked off when Annabeth didn't respect Percy's privacy

This was really good

AWESOME story. thank u for telling the real Percy

In some stories people make Percy seem like an idiot. Shallow, only the "comic relief" or "sass master." Thank you for showing him as he truly is

Amazing

This poem represents what I think Percy is exactly. If he was an idiot, how would he create battle plans? Or even fight? Fighting is both brain and brawn, and...I don't know. What was I talking about? Anyway, favorite poem yet!

can i punch them PERCY NOT DUMB HE HAS OUT SMARTED ANNABETH IN THE FRIST BOOK IN A LOT OF CHAPTERS

i still want to punch theam