Reviews for Pain and Pleasure
Guest chapter 21 . 6/26
Please update! I love this story
SakuraJenSelacnob chapter 21 . 3/29
it was amazing
cant wait for another update uwu
Sun and moon100 chapter 21 . 9/17/2019
Please update when you can
Guest chapter 14 . 7/16/2019
Oh wow i love this story so much
CherryTheRose chapter 4 . 7/11/2019
yes, the victim may enjoy it becuase its fucking ment to pleasure, but that doesnt mean the victim wants it. rape is still rape, as long as the victim doesnt want it. Just so you guys know
CherryTheRose chapter 1 . 7/11/2019
sakura is so ooc here
Guest chapter 21 . 5/26/2019
Very glad my precious boi, Tobi, wasn't involved with this :D
Honestly, I feel bad for Sakura, but it was a great story! Good job!
TBNRkurama chapter 21 . 3/16/2019
This is a very interesting idea! I have to admit though… after a while all the sex becomes a bit repetitive which is why I liked Hidan punishing her. But yas maybe do a scene in Konoha with Naruto coming to rescue her? Maybe he gets captured? Keep going!
Lucy chapter 5 . 12/23/2018
I love how caring you make Itachi in the chapter to Sakura
kenzie.parish chapter 7 . 12/7/2018
I know this really doesn’t mean much 2 years after this has been written but as a massive Kisame lover I have to say... he’s the NICEST person in the Akatsuki. The language he uses is always very VERY respectful, he has never ONCE insulted someone in the series, and he genuinely cared about Itachi as a friend. His last words in the entire series showed how deeply he cared about being a good person. He left his village because he wasn’t ok with being ordered to kill his comrades endlessly, knowing that as soon as those in power were done with him, he would be killed the same way. Literally his entire existence in the series is about him not being ok with how the world worked, struggling internally with his own morality and humanity, and him ultimately being a man of honor.
I know this has not a lot to do with this fic but seeing Kisame constantly portrayed as a crass inhuman ruthless brute bugs me.
OTHER THAN THAT! The fic is pretty good so far, and I’m enjoying myself :)
Guest chapter 21 . 7/23/2018
More chapters please!
ZZeronorth chapter 21 . 7/25/2018
I hope someday you return and finish it. It was a very interesting read, and certainly not something you would expect.

Sakura as an unwilling sex-toy for an organization that I never envisioned would resort to pleasurable rape as a form of torture is a deep concept.

Question: What was the Akatsuki's true goal? The plot runs a bit too deep for them to only transform her into a doll for Sasori. I also feel that "mission productivity" is a bit short-sighted, as far as an explanation is concerned also.

Second question: Will Sakura become pregnant and forced to carry her baby to term? If torture alone was the Akatsuki's only motive, that would almost entirely ensure her absolute devotion and her total acceptance as the organization's cum-dump.
ShadowHokage chapter 14 . 7/9/2018
Wow. You should do something like Konan and Sakura become REALLY close, like closer than Itachi and Sakura are. Like she should feel safe around Konan. Y'know, than kinda thing. But hey, it's your story. I'm sure you have more amazing ideas!
Nick schneider chapter 21 . 7/6/2018
Please keep writing this story, also if I were to suggest something I saw something in the kakazu chapter I feel like that developed a very interesting dynamic if u were to do another chapter on that you could expand on it
Guest chapter 21 . 6/11/2018
I didn’t like it I was hopping that in the end she would be rescued...BUT NO
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