Espero que la historia continúe estaba muy interesante

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Verrrry niiiiiiice

This is yes. Amazing. Adorable. Yas.

Whoa oooh

This soo cute. Though Itachi-dono made his first kill at 4, ne. Hope you continue...:-)

I’m liking where this is going, but the intro was bad- other than that it’s looking good.

What I’m wondering is - when r they? Is this after they all died off in the timeline ? Because if that’s not the case there’s a risk of running into they’re adult selves. Or, at least, in Obito case he’d run into Kakashi as a grown man rather than the boy he remembers.

Obito didn’t technically die till well after everybody else had already died. This story, I pity u, is a can of worms. There are a number of ways u can take this.

If, this is after they originally died then that towers would have already been destroyed to be honest. After the fight with Jiraya if I remember right. If that’s the case then Jiraya is already dead, and, I don’t wanna be a downer but - the last war- Obito died then. I’m actually hoping that this takes place after that/ - if it’s before that u have a problem...

Here’s another odd random thing that’s just occurred to me. Are they wearing cloths from the time stream they were takin from? Or- ? Fact is u can’t call this a de-age type story when u merely plucked them from specific points in their lives. Then again, labels who needs em lol

... um sorry that wAs ridiculously long, but I’m hoping u update soon. I haven’t created a new account on the site yet but, here’s my email. . Keep up the good work.

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*amusement*
Itachi and Konan are totally the actual brains of the entire operation that keep it functional. XD Good thing their respective attached not-minions are used to following another person's brainy-ness.
Well.
Most of them.
Enough of them.
Obito, Nagato, and Yahiko, at least. That means they outnumber the rest, so it works.

(Nagato by virtue of being so little - he has yet to experience life without his parents. Yahiko's behavior implies he'd be one of the brains if he was closer to their age instead of super tiny.)

So, we have chibi-fied Akatsuki who don't remember being Akatsuki. Zetsu stalking them because they are too much work to replace this late in the game. A general heading for Konoha intended, though I'm not sure how they'll get started - Obito probably hasn't been to Ame before to have a heading, the Ame trio probably haven't been far out of Ame, Deidara's completely out of his area as is Kisame though at least Kisame can work with the wet well, and who knows what precocious Itachi has managed to memorize already at his age.

On that note, we can expect "getting lost" to be a recurring argument whether or not they actually are, disagreements about where borders are, and I do hope to laugh at Deidara having some difficulties because he's not used to dealing with so much wet all the time and some explosives really dislike wet. And Kisame giving others weird looks because i/how do they not know how to waterwalk/i (though some of them should know that by now it's definitely not universal)

*gigglefit* Honestly, something like that happening in the Gods Tower in Ame is probably for the best - the worst I could see the villagers reacting to the kids would be to assume the tiny Konan and her boys are an attempt to create more Angel's or demigods in their Image, or somehow having shrunk themselves because why wouldn't a God be able to do that? XD
The kids are about the safest they can get under the circumstances by virtue of being in Ame. Granted, it's fairly unlikely anyone there can fix their problems, but at least in short term... XD

This is great

This is interesting. Please continue.

now... this is originality at its finest

This... There are no words to describe how GENIUS it is! The writing is well-done, the plot creatively original & the interactions both I.C. & very entertaining! *grins like Obito*
I can't wait for more!

if you have no interest in finishing this, I would like a Crack at doing so

Kakashi reaction to Obito! That is a situation Id like to see/read about.