This was brilliant!

I just read your fantastic story. I hadn’t heard a whole lot about BTK, so it was interesting to get some essence from that real life case mixed with these characters. You obviously put a lot of time in to writing, so thank you for sharing it. I really did enjoy reading it.

I started to freak out when I saw the first “deleted scene” because I was fearing that too. Throughout some chapters, especially after the one with the dream, I was afraid that the murder guy would come up in there and kill them. It was scary, but amazing at the same time. I am glad I read this and I wanted to thank you. So, thank you. You truely did a wonderful job on this.

super thanks for sharing this story... I really enjoyed reading it.

I'm missing an encounter here between the criminal and the girls in their apartment.. They caught him very easily , nice story but Lilly but disappointed

Forget to say one other thing : you write the funny pieces so well. It's kinda weird having so terrified by the crime but on the other hand can also laugh crazily on Beca's reaction to everything *again excuse my english* so, good job you! xx

As one who kinda obsessed with crime/detective story, it kinda annoyed me when the story changed its center to Bechloe relationship- at least at the beginning of it (when Chloe has to go back to Virginia). Because up until ch.8, it's centered on the case. Like, this is the only fic that made me dont care about the Bechloe relationship *excuse my english*. But then after ch.11, I can actually enjoy the two out (the case and the bechloe). Lol

this is a pretty detailed crime fic, but in my opinion, I would like it even more if the criminal could be a little more clever. Would be so interesting reading some battle of intelligence between the criminal and the detectives. Just my opinion, though.

All in all, this has been a great journey, so thank you for this x

Thank you very much for the story. This is one of the best BeChloe fanfics I've read for sure. Or crime fanfics. The amount of details and the realness of it all is amazing. I really appreciate the time you put into this. Your writing is concise, intriguing, and funny. I never felt I want to skip any block of texts. Pacing was perfect and there was no fillers or unnecessary drama. All in all, you did an awesome job and thanks again for this! :D

The case-closed/send-off party was sweet. Aubrey even called Beca her first name. :) Cynthia Rose promised Jesse and Beca a drink (before she was pulled off the case) but was kind of MIA in the party, though.
Glad Beca is the one who moves. No one's career has to suffer this way.

Thank you so much for not going down the route where something goes wrong and the girls fell in near-death danger before turning the tables. Phew.

Wow you really do read a lot of crime books :)
Glad they took the duty seriously now. I just don't think Beca should be in the stake-out since her face is known. Jesse is a much safer choice.
Paul has a family! That contradicts with Chloe's character profile of the killer.

Uh, no. You're on duty, girls! What if some reporters got the pictures? Aubrey would rage. XD
Great job depicting the whole stake-out. I felt nervous for Beca the whole drive. I have a feeling the guy (if he was the killer) knew he was being followed, though. Hope they noted down the license plate number as well.

The tactics are educational. Thank you! :) I wonder how they decide when to use what tactic in real life.
Oh no. Beca is now the face of the police. I can't help but fear that Beca's dream about the killer visiting her apartment would come true. Or one of them would end up playing a decoy..

Yay, Chloe is back! I knew she was going to surprise Beca when I saw the short texts. But what are they going to do after they catch the killer though..? I don't think Beca is going to train to be an FBI so maybe it's Chloe transferring to Barden.

Hey, this chapter is awesome. Nothing to worry about, really. It's romantic. And they finally made things official. Brownie points for the 'I love you's. Yay!